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yeet
Join Date: Mar 1993
Posts: 3,956
Battle Record: 20-34
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Rayge had the blood type line and Missal n Hymn. The other lines weren't misses, those just stood out. A pretty consistent verse, the dropped fire line has been used.
Mac, the giving keys line could have been nice but you didn't deliver a heavy punch. The other lines weren't very good either. lords and cards does not rhyme. immigrant bitch, stop seekin the american dream & prayin to the lords i would play UNO with you.. but you'd just steal all the green cards lords/cards nope. You have good concepts Mac, it just seems statementish. V/Rayge |
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