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03-09-2014, 05:17 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2014
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Jay your only solid connect was the tettris line. First line wasnt that bad either in terms of connection. Overall the verse read kinda choppy. Work on polishing everyything and you'll be better. Nik, shoot a jay and sky was dope. Was done nicely and rest was solid as well. Mvgt nik
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