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@Mike Wrecka please post what i would assume is a rewrite, although I would also assume that I've only seen the decoy of your recent work.
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why, that would be news, gossip, fun, entertainment, and enjoyable conversation of course!
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Another acceptable answer would have been 'The craic is mighty' Now for a more difficult one...how's she cutting?
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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We are 30 minutes from deadline.
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Lime Life
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Oats vs Zygote is insane.
That's the only battle I've read but I'd be surprised if it isn't botw. Much respect to both of you.
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Ben Bradlee was such a fucking boss.
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Phew. This week's verse took a lot out of me. Glad I could get it in in time.
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last minute scramble to get a verse together... only to be noshowed... unless @Greed drops in the next 2 minutes
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why do i keep doing this to myself?
one day i'll drop more than 30s before deadline i swear by the moons and the stars in the sky
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This week, 25 people showed and seven did not. That's not so bad, but hopefully we've weeded out most of the no-shows for future weeks, even if it means a smaller field.
To those who were no-showed, I again will offer extended feedback on your verses. But you still must vote.
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Lime Life
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YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.
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all of the stars in the skys are actually just light emitted from them thousands or even millions of years ago so those stars are actually all gone and dead...just like your dreams and promises
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So SOME of his dreams and promises are still alive.
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ghost in the matrix
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no..the ones alive don't count either; those are angels not stars. ask my grandma
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come on
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ghost in the matrix
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sorry bro, this headache is making me lash out
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I think I love you. <3
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ghost in the matrix
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aww the feelings mutual...I think that I think I love you too
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I need to move to the West Coast so that my sleep schedule isn't so fucked up. Or maybe Hawaii. If I lived on Hawaii, I'd probably write some beautiful Open Mic verses about how the beach mirrors my emotions.
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Just went to a concert,then, since I know people who know people I wound up at the private after party at the expensive club with famous people chea! Went to Dennys,created my own skillet which was fugginbomb. Now at a friends house drinking brew, playing cards with a couple girls. Night bitches.
Posting Thursday is awesome I
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