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Old 03-05-2014, 02:58 PM   #1
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Default Sacrificial L.A.M.B. pt. I

It's been to long... i'm hellllllla rusty but fuck it

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Uppercut leave you mauled in descent, drawing the tech
Witness Para Shooting Malphunction and watch Neigh fall to his death
I'll brawl with the best but no one's better.
Battling me is a Death Sentence, ask Hush what i can do wit one letter
Rep battered and snapped, proof his stature is wack
when I dangle the belt over H, then challenge him to a Ladder Match
Who's the champ? The league knows its been shitty
How Kar ran over this pussy, R.I.P. David and my condolences Witty
Every punch you throw misses swiftly. I'm weaving and dodging
He's heaving, hocking, weezing and coughing wit no defensive blocking
leaning, wobbling, bleeding and rocking, back and forth, swaying
struggling to find ya balance, IRS is still searching in the Caymans
Whats wording to you laymans? Weird what a comma changes
On the Net, Worths taken into account, You'd get 3 years for tax evasion
This is Doritos to a caveman, feet to you disgusting fags
Every bar has this fire effect similar to Bags Video Discussion mag
The ugliest fucking swag, need a disguise wit this guys mug
I am not famous anymore Bags, but you need one of those like Shia Leabouf
I hope you die and its rough or survive with a twist
that they amputate ya arms, legs... and Destroyer off from your dick

When did blatant homotextual faggotry become okay? no wonder text is dead...

One punch and it's lights out. Step if you dare, homie
I'll leave you retired, missing the ring like the Olympics opening ceremony
I'll end ya career phony, Battle Arena had you exposed
I hope every Aer Lines never seen again, and you crash land in one of those
One punch knock him out cold, body twists and awkwardly folds
Sending Aeros in so many directions before the B A... without a Konami code
One punch break ya jaw and ya nose, my left is this deadly
Da Feet and Cum, lines will get you a toe tag... in that thread wit Eddie
Creativity is dead, Netcees sent me to identify the corpse
couldn't reconize the dead_man... guess nature had already run its course
Backhanded compliments with the pimp slap disrespect
Lets compare who has beaten who lists before you ever diss me in text

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if you leave feed and I'll RTF.

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Old 03-06-2014, 05:51 AM   #2
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Paea shooting malfunction line was dope.. It's 4:50amright now so I'm getting money but I might really read the rest later.
Good work
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Old 03-06-2014, 05:56 AM   #3
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Dope shit

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Old 03-06-2014, 09:17 AM   #4
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Paea shooting malfunction line was dope.. It's 4:50amright now so I'm getting money but I might really read the rest later.
Good work
word I'm trying to get them AeroLike views

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Old 03-06-2014, 09:18 AM   #5
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Yea, brilliant work. Obviously I'm not up on the personal mentions here but that ladder match line ... lol
Perfect example of why lines don't always need to end in hefty multis. Still looked tasty.
It's like a subliminal netcees history lesson for members like me that don't know the reasoning behind these hits. Very enjoyable read
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Old 03-06-2014, 04:49 PM   #6
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Every punch you throw misses swiftly. I'm weaving and dodging
He's heaving, hocking, weezing and coughing wit no defensive blocking
Cool
Whats wording to you laymans? Weird what a comma changes
On the Net, Worths taken into account, You'd get 3 years for tax evasion
Nice
This is Doritos to a caveman, feet to you disgusting fags
Every bar has this fire effect similar to Bags Video Discussion mag
Cool

This was an alright diss. I liked the above quotes. Keep it up and the rust will come off...
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Old 03-07-2014, 04:00 AM   #7
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The nameplay here was cool. I don't peep the battles much, but this was entertaining for the most part. Keep dropping.
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Old 03-07-2014, 07:57 AM   #8
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Old 03-07-2014, 11:36 AM   #9
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This was dope, tax evasion bar was nice
Cool read props
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Old 03-07-2014, 06:05 PM   #10
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lmao the parashooting malphunxion bar was dope, not sure if everyone will catch that it was his old name but those of us whove known him long enough will get it

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thought that was nice too

keep that pen moving!
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Old 03-07-2014, 06:55 PM   #11
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Old 03-08-2014, 01:53 AM   #12
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Old 03-08-2014, 01:59 AM   #13
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This was nice dude, I could quote a few lines but I am on my phone and that is too much work,the net worth line was clever but it was all pretty dope, thank you for your condolences lol

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I give respect where it's due. But that H shits hella played
when U climbing a ladder with one rung no wonder u never elevate
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Weaving n dodging with defensive blocking. -bis

Just noticed that likeness. Whatevs. Cool shit. Has some real dope schemes and lines/ideas
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Lol. Fire.




Deaddd@the H ladder making an appearance for tgis piece tho


An uhh....destro used that fire line better in his battle verse me......that u even read lol


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when U climbing a ladder with one rung no wonder u never elevate

I'mma be chillin in the Hall of Fame thinking bout the murder I shown Hush
One punch and you'll wake up wondering how you got here yaself... without going out for burgers and donuts

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For real tho u bit a des line after berading him for having a ghostwrite...which you only knew...cuz you read the battle that he said that line u jacked.

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rofl the fuck

ok all strikta aids lines are all bitten after the first one was posted gtfo

edit: how bout you give some real feed thanks

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I can't tell if you dissed me or not

But were homies so I'll assume not :)
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