03-05-2014, 02:58 PM | #1 |
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Sacrificial L.A.M.B. pt. I
It's been to long... i'm hellllllla rusty but fuck it
. . . Uppercut leave you mauled in descent, drawing the tech Witness Para Shooting Malphunction and watch Neigh fall to his death I'll brawl with the best but no one's better. Battling me is a Death Sentence, ask Hush what i can do wit one letter Rep battered and snapped, proof his stature is wack when I dangle the belt over H, then challenge him to a Ladder Match Who's the champ? The league knows its been shitty How Kar ran over this pussy, R.I.P. David and my condolences Witty Every punch you throw misses swiftly. I'm weaving and dodging He's heaving, hocking, weezing and coughing wit no defensive blocking leaning, wobbling, bleeding and rocking, back and forth, swaying struggling to find ya balance, IRS is still searching in the Caymans Whats wording to you laymans? Weird what a comma changes On the Net, Worths taken into account, You'd get 3 years for tax evasion This is Doritos to a caveman, feet to you disgusting fags Every bar has this fire effect similar to Bags Video Discussion mag The ugliest fucking swag, need a disguise wit this guys mug I am not famous anymore Bags, but you need one of those like Shia Leabouf I hope you die and its rough or survive with a twist that they amputate ya arms, legs... and Destroyer off from your dick When did blatant homotextual faggotry become okay? no wonder text is dead... One punch and it's lights out. Step if you dare, homie I'll leave you retired, missing the ring like the Olympics opening ceremony I'll end ya career phony, Battle Arena had you exposed I hope every Aer Lines never seen again, and you crash land in one of those One punch knock him out cold, body twists and awkwardly folds Sending Aeros in so many directions before the B A... without a Konami code One punch break ya jaw and ya nose, my left is this deadly Da Feet and Cum, lines will get you a toe tag... in that thread wit Eddie Creativity is dead, Netcees sent me to identify the corpse couldn't reconize the dead_man... guess nature had already run its course Backhanded compliments with the pimp slap disrespect Lets compare who has beaten who lists before you ever diss me in text - Paradigm if you leave feed and I'll RTF. and @Neighbor @Hush @Bags @Destroyer @Aero @dead man @Witty Last edited by Paradigm; 03-07-2014 at 02:25 PM. |
03-06-2014, 05:51 AM | #2 |
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Paea shooting malfunction line was dope.. It's 4:50amright now so I'm getting money but I might really read the rest later.
Good work
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03-06-2014, 09:17 AM | #4 |
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03-06-2014, 09:18 AM | #5 |
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Yea, brilliant work. Obviously I'm not up on the personal mentions here but that ladder match line ... lol
Perfect example of why lines don't always need to end in hefty multis. Still looked tasty. It's like a subliminal netcees history lesson for members like me that don't know the reasoning behind these hits. Very enjoyable read |
03-06-2014, 04:49 PM | #6 |
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Every punch you throw misses swiftly. I'm weaving and dodging
He's heaving, hocking, weezing and coughing wit no defensive blocking Cool Whats wording to you laymans? Weird what a comma changes On the Net, Worths taken into account, You'd get 3 years for tax evasion Nice This is Doritos to a caveman, feet to you disgusting fags Every bar has this fire effect similar to Bags Video Discussion mag Cool This was an alright diss. I liked the above quotes. Keep it up and the rust will come off... |
03-07-2014, 04:00 AM | #7 |
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The nameplay here was cool. I don't peep the battles much, but this was entertaining for the most part. Keep dropping.
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03-07-2014, 07:57 AM | #8 |
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word thanks
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03-07-2014, 11:36 AM | #9 |
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This was dope, tax evasion bar was nice
Cool read props
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03-07-2014, 06:05 PM | #10 |
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lmao the parashooting malphunxion bar was dope, not sure if everyone will catch that it was his old name but those of us whove known him long enough will get it
This is Doritos to a caveman, feet to you disgusting fags Every bar has this fire effect similar to Bags Video Discussion mag thought that was nice too keep that pen moving!
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03-07-2014, 06:55 PM | #11 |
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Oh your the ladder H guy
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03-08-2014, 01:53 AM | #12 |
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03-08-2014, 01:59 AM | #13 |
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This was nice dude, I could quote a few lines but I am on my phone and that is too much work,the net worth line was clever but it was all pretty dope, thank you for your condolences lol
Props bro.
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03-08-2014, 09:07 AM | #14 |
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I give respect where it's due. But that H shits hella played
when U climbing a ladder with one rung no wonder u never elevate
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03-08-2014, 09:51 AM | #15 |
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Weaving n dodging with defensive blocking. -bis
Just noticed that likeness. Whatevs. Cool shit. Has some real dope schemes and lines/ideas
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Deaddd@the H ladder making an appearance for tgis piece tho An uhh....destro used that fire line better in his battle verse me......that u even read lol Ill have to read the rest later |
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03-09-2014, 07:19 AM | #19 |
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rofl the fuck
ok all strikta aids lines are all bitten after the first one was posted gtfo edit: how bout you give some real feed thanks Last edited by Paradigm; 03-09-2014 at 07:23 AM. |
03-09-2014, 10:47 AM | #20 |
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I can't tell if you dissed me or not
But were homies so I'll assume not :)
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