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03-02-2014, 11:13 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2013
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V/ ydk
Rhyme scheme more basic but a much more fleshed out oiece and with far more sincerity attached. Ink's piece seemed to end abruptly due to line limit or forcing the topic as a conclusion at the end of an unassociated story. It threw me off and needed more time to bring the characters from A to B. YDK told a whole story, emotionally involved and attached to the topic.
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