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03-02-2014, 10:13 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 501
Battle Record: 33-12
Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x)
Champed - Art of Writing League (3x)
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Enjoyed the thematic cohesion of language and concept from YDK better than focused narration of Ink. Ink's narration bordered on a kind of satire at times, but perhaps the underlying social themes were a little bit muddled. YDK had good mechanical elements, but didn't feel that the progression was fully effective. Voting for Ink.
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