Week 1: maths debate vs. El Pancake \\ El Pancake wins 6-0

H4ZE · 02-28-2014, 09:42 PM

Pancake- this verse was awesome. The imagery was amazing, flow was good, nice wording and rhyming. It was dope.
I love the story, the way you went at this topic was dope.

Math- this was pretty good, just not up to par with pancakes. Nice rhyming and flow. But the imagery wasnt there like pancakes was. So you need to work on that. I could feel the emotion in pancakes verse but not so much in yours. Though I did like the ending a lot.

Mvgt El Pancake

02-28-2014, 09:42 PM	#1
H4ZE Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Florida Posts: 77 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	Pancake- this verse was awesome. The imagery was amazing, flow was good, nice wording and rhyming. It was dope. I love the story, the way you went at this topic was dope. Math- this was pretty good, just not up to par with pancakes. Nice rhyming and flow. But the imagery wasnt there like pancakes was. So you need to work on that. I could feel the emotion in pancakes verse but not so much in yours. Though I did like the ending a lot. Mvgt El Pancake