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02-28-2014, 04:16 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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If I spent a full day really racking my brain on this, I am confident I would have found the pattern. And that's probably how it should be. The pattern was very real and well-executed.
This was exceptionally well done. The only thing I might have said would have been to rhyme the introduction, too.
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