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Old 02-27-2014, 01:55 PM   #4
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I think the imagery is your best point, the jump rope with intestines was real vivid, plenty of gore to this but then I'm a horrorcore fan so I can appreciate it fully.

I think swag and flow joints would be better suited to your style because of you being a battler, it's easier to adapt to that format than it will be for you to go full topical or open mic orientated.

@Genocide would probably be good for you to write with, similar style and all, the two could compliment each other. You should collab for sure.

Keep that pen moving!
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