i can't write a topical for shit - Page 3

Split · 02-26-2014, 11:36 PM

the dudes name was Thomas O'Tool

he was a ginger headed, smarmy faggotborn toolbox with Europa class acne

Certain · 02-26-2014, 11:44 PM

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Originally Posted by big baby

i got sexiest baby peen for nursery school

I heard you came up short.

big baby · 02-26-2014, 11:51 PM

yeah shut up certain

PancakeBrah · 02-26-2014, 11:58 PM

@maths debate

I rewrote my verse just to let you know.

maths debate · 02-27-2014, 12:03 AM

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Originally Posted by big baby

maths youre gonna lose btw as dans verse is good enough to match top tiers and youre just very stellar in drawing caricatures which is not topical writing. but you havea golden treiviergeir as your avy so it could be close

i was that kid in preschool who wanted to commit suicide during the 1,019,137th round of the infinite loop motif game "who stole the cookie from the cookie jar?"

for some unknown reason they wouldn't accept it when i declared myself the cookie thief

maths debate · 02-27-2014, 12:05 AM

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Originally Posted by El Pancake

@maths debate

I rewrote my verse just to let you know.

have mercy on my soul oh mighty lawrd of the AOWL

Certain · 02-27-2014, 12:09 AM

You stole the cookie?

I fucking hate you.

maths debate · 02-27-2014, 12:40 AM

dont hate the playa, hate the game, dawg

and lol @El Pancake taking the piss

> tells El Pancake i cant write a topical for shit
> El Pancake rewrites a whole new piece with more lines
> maths debate ponders his earlier work
> ???
> debt

but for real though, i'ma drop soon get ready to open those doors to votes

maths debate · 02-27-2014, 12:41 AM

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Originally Posted by Split Eight

the dudes name was Thomas O'Tool

he was a ginger headed, smarmy faggotborn toolbox with Europa class acne

did lmao @ O'Tool

PancakeBrah · 02-27-2014, 12:45 AM

lol

I just didn't like the first one.

IT WASN'T ABOUT GURLS

YDK · 02-27-2014, 01:41 AM

[QUOTE=Aesthetic;284981]when, where, why, how.

Make up some words and use google until it corrects you. Then use that word; then make sense of that word and combine it with a whole bunch of other big words until it's impossible to make sense. After it cant be translated, act like it makes sense.

After that, everyone should give you votes because they dont wanna look dumb. Oh yeah, try and use descriptions about the things that dont make sense like:

The asteroids vortex collapsed with fractals of colors shooting rampant.[/QUOTE]

LMFAO I think I just had a mini aneurism however he fuck you spell it

Seyance · 02-27-2014, 06:04 AM

you need to read more really good verses, and other shit in general, its how i get into the mood to write topical.

02-26-2014, 11:36 PM	#41
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,904 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899396	the dudes name was Thomas O'Tool he was a ginger headed, smarmy faggotborn toolbox with Europa class acne __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

02-26-2014, 11:58 PM	#44
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	@maths debate I rewrote my verse just to let you know. __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

02-27-2014, 12:09 AM	#47
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899403	You stole the cookie? I fucking hate you. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

02-27-2014, 12:45 AM	#50
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	lol I just didn't like the first one. IT WASN'T ABOUT GURLS __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

02-27-2014, 01:41 AM	#51
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181110	[QUOTE=Aesthetic;284981]when, where, why, how. Make up some words and use google until it corrects you. Then use that word; then make sense of that word and combine it with a whole bunch of other big words until it's impossible to make sense. After it cant be translated, act like it makes sense. After that, everyone should give you votes because they dont wanna look dumb. Oh yeah, try and use descriptions about the things that dont make sense like: The asteroids vortex collapsed with fractals of colors shooting rampant.[/QUOTE] LMFAO I think I just had a mini aneurism however he fuck you spell it __________________

02-27-2014, 12:40 AM	#48
maths debate maths da dawg Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 207 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 1936246	dont hate the playa, hate the game, dawg and lol @El Pancake taking the piss > tells El Pancake i cant write a topical for shit > El Pancake rewrites a whole new piece with more lines > maths debate ponders his earlier work > ??? > debt but for real though, i'ma drop soon get ready to open those doors to votes

02-27-2014, 06:04 AM	#52
Seyance - Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,060 Battle Record: 0-4 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night VII Rep Power: 0	you need to read more really good verses, and other shit in general, its how i get into the mood to write topical. __________________ i'm truely renaissance.. dominate the web, television, movies and beyond when a leader gets to speaking, it's your duty to respond.. i'm a leave these niggas leaking like i'm julian assange.