DTK Vs nOX - NOX WINS

[DTK]

10 lines
No flips
First to 5 or 3 KO

If I'm missing anything lemme know

I'll post my two links with my verse

What's the deadline?

24 hours? If so, cool.

Chinchek.

[DTK]

I agree to a 24 hour deadline

[DTK]

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=35524
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=51897

Expos :

*BSN supplements makes a product called NO-Xplode
*He said his fav car was the skyline (foreign version), I'm foreign to this site

NOX simply can't fuck with this, his skills include sucking dick
D, is dropping bombs..making NO-XPlode like BSN Supplements!*
I punch and rip a rookie, so you better start protecting your throat
Cuz you could be an NFL receiver and still not be a threat when you post!
Teaching him a lesson in blows, leaving him broke in defeat
His preference is a foreign style so he'll probably end up voting for me!*
He'll be smoked and deceased, nOX is taking abuse cuz I'm gunning
Cuz you couldn't be Ab-Nautious if he puked on my stomach
Your bars can't stand my weight, you better invite some help
Cuz I'll leave Nox criticized for taking an L like Michael Phelps!

EXT till tomorrow midnight. Won't have my PC/Laptop till sometime tomorrow.

[DTK]

Lol you kidding me? I post my verse then you ask for an extension? You would of known today that you wouldn't of had a p/c until tomorrow when we set this up

Nah, on my phone. I said I'll have my PC tomorrow, hence why I said 24 hours in my check in. Relax, I don't pull that faggot no-show, bullshit.

I got you, bro.

Um, quick key...

I'm crushing fags, and with a style like yours? It sucks, a fact,
Cuz this pussy's Korea's shot... And hopefully the burn'll kill'em from the clap.
Your written's are sloppy, you shady fuck, the kid is just dodgy,
I'm reigning fist in the forecast... You'll just need one on every limb on your body.
Kid you suck with the pen, A geek at heart & has nothing with in,
So even if oppurtunity nOx... He'd open a door just to get sucker punched in the chin.
My flows'll just stomp those who oppose nOx, you'll get dropped bro,
Cuz if there's N E talent in D' Lines... TOM BRADY would've never lost to the Broncos.
And I know you're gay, quit the faggotry... kid I'm not just hatin,
But if bitches are fucking D... It's probably 12 inches long, pink and battery operated.

10. You lose.

EDIT: Placing voting links.
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=44132
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=51897

[Allen Knight]

Opener

Vs

ne talent, Closer


V/nox, dtk has decent wording but alot of played concepts like the Michael phelps bar..nox had acouple cool bars almost qouted the nox but he also had some played
Shit like the forcast bar. but I liked the tom brady jawn and closer they were cool

[KwaL!ty]

NOX simply can't fuck with this, his skills include sucking dick
D, is dropping bombs..making NO-XPlode like BSN Supplements!*

vs


My flows'll just stomp those who oppose nOx, you'll get dropped bro,
Cuz if there's N E talent in D' Lines... TOM BRADY would've never lost to the Broncos.
And I know you're gay, quit the faggotry... kid I'm not just hatin,
But if bitches are fucking D... It's probably 12 inches long, pink and battery operated.

Nox almost had the opened the door line which was funny but not to hard hitting.


Vote Nox

[FloSoIll]

Nice battle guys

Dtk
U had a nice verse. Solid punches/wordplay and decent flow. Def liked your michael phelps line ..imo best line of ur verse

Nox
Im new to the site but damn bro that shit was flames..solid execution thru out ur connections were on point in almost every bar. Was feelin the flow

Best bar was N E talent in Ds lines tom brady wouldnt of lost to the broncos

Good shit

Mvgt nox for a better verse overall

[DTK]

3 KO, NOX.

Good battle dude

[Answer]

NOX simply can't fuck with this, his skills include sucking dick
D, is dropping bombs..making NO-XPlode like BSN Supplements!*

not of fan of you abbreviation nOX as no just to make this work

I punch and rip a rookie, so you better start protecting your throat
Cuz you could be an NFL receiver and still not be a threat when you post!

okayish, I've seen similar lines

Teaching him a lesson in blows, leaving him broke in defeat
His preference is a foreign style so he'll probably end up voting for me!*

you worded this in a way that you're rely on having an expo in order for this to make sense. You should've at least alluded to the fact that he's into foreign cars in your set-up

He'll be smoked and deceased, nOX is taking abuse cuz I'm gunning
Cuz you couldn't be Ab-Nautious if he puked on my stomach

not really feeling this

Your bars can't stand my weight, you better invite some help
Cuz I'll leave Nox criticized for taking an L like Michael Phelps!

I've seen a lot of L/weed lines in my life, also this happened a long time ago. Eh



I'm crushing fags, and with a style like yours? It sucks, a fact,
Cuz this pussy's Korea's shot... And hopefully the burn'll kill'em from the clap.

Not feeling it

Your written's are sloppy, you shady fuck, the kid is just dodgy,
I'm reigning fist in the forecast... You'll just need one on every limb on your body.

Okay, i think the wording could've been more effective

Kid you suck with the pen, A geek at heart & has nothing with in,
So even if oppurtunity nOx... He'd open a door just to get sucker punched in the chin.'

dont like the wording of this or the self nameplay

My flows'll just stomp those who oppose nOx, you'll get dropped bro,
Cuz if there's N E talent in D' Lines... TOM BRADY would've never lost to the Broncos.

Concept's cool...a bit too textish for my likings, but it gets creativity points

And I know you're gay, quit the faggotry... kid I'm not just hatin,
But if bitches are fucking D... It's probably 12 inches long, pink and battery operated.

Not really feeling this. If the only D women fucked were vibrators then the human species would cease to exist


MVGT - Nox for better wording and concepts

Originally Posted by DTK

3 KO, NOX.

Good battle dude

No doubt, bro. Good looks.

[Bender]

NOX simply can't fuck with this, his skills include sucking dick
D, is dropping bombs..making NO-XPlode like BSN Supplements!*
Seemed kind of forced if you ask me
I punch and rip a rookie, so you better start protecting your throat
Cuz you could be an NFL receiver and still not be a threat when you post!
not too bad, nfl punches have been done
Teaching him a lesson in blows, leaving him broke in defeat
His preference is a foreign style so he'll probably end up voting for me!*
cool punch
He'll be smoked and deceased, nOX is taking abuse cuz I'm gunning
Cuz you couldn't be Ab-Nautious if he puked on my stomach
not feeling this one
Your bars can't stand my weight, you better invite some help
Cuz I'll leave Nox criticized for taking an L like Michael Phelps!
good bar like 3 years ago

vs

I'm crushing fags, and with a style like yours? It sucks, a fact,
Cuz this pussy's Korea's shot... And hopefully the burn'll kill'em from the clap.
not bad a little forced though
Your written's are sloppy, you shady fuck, the kid is just dodgy,
I'm reigning fist in the forecast... You'll just need one on every limb on your body.
i feel like this was going somewhere and it fell flat
Kid you suck with the pen, A geek at heart & has nothing with in,
So even if oppurtunity nOx... He'd open a door just to get sucker punched in the chin.
not bad
My flows'll just stomp those who oppose nOx, you'll get dropped bro,
Cuz if there's N E talent in D' Lines... TOM BRADY would've never lost to the Broncos.
good line a month ago
And I know you're gay, quit the faggotry... kid I'm not just hatin,
But if bitches are fucking D... It's probably 12 inches long, pink and battery operated.
ehh gay

Nox had better punches IMO, both were evenly matched up, I could see DTK doing some damage if he polished up his style a little more. I know that battles over but I would have voted for Nox.

DTK did you used to post on HHH back in the day ??

Word, thanks for the feed @Jimmy - appreciated, bro.
@Sharp Nine or @Sharp

5-0 KO? Close? Thanks.

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by Trademark

Word, thanks for the feed @Jimmy - appreciated, bro.
@Sharp Nine or @Sharp

5-0 KO? Close? Thanks.

Sorry I missed this, laptops getting repaired so I'm mobile admining haha. Will have time in school lib tonight

Not a problem, dude. Thanks.

This going to be closed? Lol @Sharp Nine or @Sharp - Give me that W, son, lol.

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by Trademark

This going to be closed? Lol @Sharp Nine or @Sharp - Give me that W, son, lol.

could not get to the library last night. I apologize that I had other things to do but i just got my computer back, repaired and will update records in a bit. also please don't @ the sharp account, thats just there for battling since this account's details cant get edited (ie record cant be changed)