02-22-2014, 06:10 PM | #21 |
green eggs and damn
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02-22-2014, 08:14 PM | #23 |
Steel Cut
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awesome, read a good chunk, will come back to finish the rest. appreciate everyone's effort in this, excited for this league to start
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02-22-2014, 08:28 PM | #24 |
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Can someone tell me the definition of the word 'Magazine'...I could look it up but I won't
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02-22-2014, 09:43 PM | #25 |
Get MacDon
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dope sht
i only write sloppy tho when im writing from on the phone, or lazy/rushing but yeah; im the boards fav criminal thats me... but good sht @Certain, and all those who contributed
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02-22-2014, 10:27 PM | #26 |
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very professional mag here Certain. props.
the audio was good too.
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02-22-2014, 10:29 PM | #27 |
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This might be a dumb question.. but i'm new.
My topic is blindness.. is it supposed to be a battle verse, or just a verse on the topic? Thanks. |
02-22-2014, 10:36 PM | #28 |
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02-22-2014, 10:43 PM | #29 |
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Cool, thanks for a legit answer.
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02-22-2014, 10:51 PM | #30 |
Razor-thin derision
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Awesome stuff fellas.
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02-23-2014, 12:00 AM | #31 |
ghost in the matrix
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dope as fuck as per norm. I hate to say it but I think your right certain, "inconsistent" is def. my biggest problem lol bring the new season on i'm ready!
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02-23-2014, 12:12 AM | #32 |
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Think of it as an Open Mic verse where you're judged on both how good your verse is and how well it relates to the topic. The one I gave you is easy.
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02-23-2014, 12:20 AM | #33 |
Licking Lily's..
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F*CKing hell, im not even playen..
My internet is getten sorted im on egyption internet connection :) so ima check the audio, and Da Talent thank you for coming back.. Adonis, Vulgar sooo much work between you three.. WOOOAAH
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02-23-2014, 04:04 AM | #34 |
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@Eŋg, did you spot any typos?
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02-23-2014, 09:32 AM | #35 |
rhyme capsule.
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i thought i saw a few (yesterday) but it was well-written.
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02-23-2014, 10:28 AM | #36 |
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Good work. Guess I'll continue to fly under the radar.
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02-23-2014, 11:28 AM | #37 |
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There's at least one typo.
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02-23-2014, 11:49 AM | #38 |
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In my parts? Tell me.
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02-23-2014, 12:22 PM | #39 |
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I forgot where. I read the whole thing yesterday. I forget which section. If I remember right it was a forgotten word like 'it' or 'the' or something.
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02-23-2014, 12:50 PM | #40 |
t00 0riginal 4 u
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You currently make the best mags |
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