02-19-2014, 09:09 PM | #1 |
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Shadow Boxing rnd1 Witty vs cntrlf4 - WITTY WINS
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My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track Stop the played rhymes or I'll cop some jail time for hate crimes, u lazy disgrace As I lay him to waste, you'll see his first original lines come from a blade to his face The way ur living is bummy, I bet it feels like prison, ur getting played and shit isn't funny His first time on a plane, he got excited at a random check cuz he thot they were givin him money This winter's cold, but the chrome I lift and point at your swollen lips is colder Ur hoe's a bitch, she's like chyeahhh, some1 needs to tell her get off the polar shift is over Ur poor as fuck, you rob for pennies, to get paid you just raise eagles So what little cash he actually gets is tainted....it taint his and it taint legal This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke cntrl Was homeless when he as 17...made a thread one day saying he was the only one logged in Fox aka witness I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news Sorry about ur childhood but hey life isn't fair Cuz at 17, I was playing True Crime: Streets of L.A. and you was prolly out living there Nobody likes you and you really need a life dude Cuz you don't just spend time irl alone, you do it on the site too Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction You've neva scored dweeb, stop actin like you givin whores d You probably only named urself witness, Cuz ur known for telling stories All ya rape threats is weird n makes us think ur screwed wit You created "That Awkward Moment" wayyyy before that new flick
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02-19-2014, 09:47 PM | #2 |
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[QUOTE=Hush;279609]Witty
My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track This is slick Stop the played rhymes or I'll cop some jail time for hate crimes, u lazy disgrace As I lay him to waste, you'll see his first original lines come from a blade to his face Eh The way ur living is bummy, I bet it feels like prison, ur getting played and shit isn't funny His first time on a plane, he got excited at a random check cuz he thot they were givin him money This is ok...ish This winter's cold, but the chrome I lift and point at your swollen lips is colder Ur hoe's a bitch, she's like chyeahhh, some1 needs to tell her get off the polar shift is over Nah Ur poor as fuck, you rob for pennies, to get paid you just raise eagles So what little cash he actually gets is tainted....it taint his and it taint legal LOL. Thats hilarious. This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke Ok cntrl Was homeless when he as 17...made a thread one day saying he was the only one logged in Fox aka witness I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news This is a jab Sorry about ur childhood but hey life isn't fair Cuz at 17, I was playing True Crime: Streets of L.A. and you was prolly out living there He lives in ireland? I get the idea tho.....nothin crazy here. Nobody likes you and you really need a life dude Cuz you don't just spend time irl alone, you do it on the site too Ok Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction Lmao. Dope. You've neva scored dweeb, stop actin like you givin whores d You probably only named urself witness, Cuz ur known for telling stories Ok All ya rape threats is weird n makes us think ur screwed wit You created "That Awkward Moment" wayyyy before that new flick Not feelin it. Witty is.alot better then i anticipated at battling...... This was mad.close imho..... it came down to the 2 haymakers for me.... ctrls compass.line vs wittys tainted line.... Iunni i kever heard a joke like that before....or seen a line like that in regards to the tainted shit......that shit leaned me hard. Both had equal misses an sum almost quotes w light jabs .....i got witty landing harder more tho V witty . |
02-19-2014, 10:37 PM | #3 |
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Witty had the opener and taint lines the rest just didnt hit well or were too wordy, overall decent verse but nothing too exciting. Ctrl had the Breakin news and compass lines, the rest just didnt work to me, pretty sub par verse from him too but those stood out. Overall I think ctrls verse as a whole was structured a little better and if I had to pick my favorite line I'd go with the compass one although something strikes me as it's been done but I haven't seen it so based on a slight bit of preference and my favorite line I got ctrl literally by a hair tho.
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02-20-2014, 12:13 AM | #4 |
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My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track This winter's cold, but the chrome I lift and point at your swollen lips is colder Ur hoe's a bitch, she's like chyeahhh, some1 needs to tell her get off the polar shift is over vs Nobody likes you and you really need a life dude Cuz you don't just spend time irl alone, you do it on the site too Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction i dunno this battle was pretty even tbh, both had some hits and misses but all in all i'm giving witty the edge for being a bit more consistent, and his quotes hitting harder than ctrls. was digging the schemes/multi link ups as well made for a good read. mvgt witt |
02-20-2014, 09:30 AM | #5 |
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My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke vs I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news Sorry about ur childhood but hey life isn't fair Cuz at 17, I was playing True Crime: Streets of L.A. and you was prolly out living there even on quotables...I think Witty put a lil more creativity into this tho so I'm going with him...good battle fellas v/Witty
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My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke vs Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction Got Witty taking this when comparing bar for bar. Quoted I felt had the most impact in which Witty got 2 I felt landed effective and nicely. Cool read guys, keep writing! v/Witty |
02-20-2014, 03:48 PM | #7 |
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My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track The way ur living is bummy, I bet it feels like prison, ur getting played and shit isn't funny His first time on a plane, he got excited at a random check cuz he thot they were givin him money This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke vs I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction ^bar of battle.. Ctrl had the bar of the battle but his misses where not even really solid jabs .. Witty surprised me didnt think he was battle type .. Vote- Witty |
02-20-2014, 09:02 PM | #8 |
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My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track Aiight Stop the played rhymes or I'll cop some jail time for hate crimes, u lazy disgrace As I lay him to waste, you'll see his first original lines come from a blade to his face Eh The way ur living is bummy, I bet it feels like prison, ur getting played and shit isn't funny His first time on a plane, he got excited at a random check cuz he thot they were givin him money This was ok This winter's cold, but the chrome I lift and point at your swollen lips is colder Ur hoe's a bitch, she's like chyeahhh, some1 needs to tell her get off the polar shift is over Dope Ur poor as fuck, you rob for pennies, to get paid you just raise eagles So what little cash he actually gets is tainted....it taint his and it taint legal I see what u were trying to do, & it didn't work for me This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke Ok close Vs. I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news Ok Sorry about ur childhood but hey life isn't fair Cuz at 17, I was playing True Crime: Streets of L.A. and you was prolly out living there Nah Nobody likes you and you really need a life dude Cuz you don't just spend time irl alone, you do it on the site too U could have done something better w/ this Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction lol You've neva scored dweeb, stop actin like you givin whores d You probably only named urself witness, Cuz ur known for telling stories Ehh, naw All ya rape threats is weird n makes us think ur screwed wit You created "That Awkward Moment" wayyyy before that new flick Ok close This was kinda close actually.. I got Witty edging it tho.. he had a more crisp verse & just slightly slicker concepts. They were almost even on quotes I'd say.. it really would all just come down to preference tbh.. & if Ctrl would have came just a tad better idea-wise, or cleaned up his wording some.. he coulda took it in my eyes. Another thing working against him was the explanation at the beginning of the verse, as it is a nono in text to me. U shouldn't ever have to resort to doing that.. it kinda fucks w/ the authenticity of what ur about to have us read. Other than that, props to both of ya'll for a cool read. Vote- Witty Last edited by Strikta; 02-20-2014 at 09:05 PM. |
02-20-2014, 09:41 PM | #9 |
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Just got that polar shift line. Damn. That shit was raw....i feel dumb now.
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02-21-2014, 07:22 PM | #10 |
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My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track ok Stop the played rhymes or I'll cop some jail time for hate crimes, u lazy disgrace As I lay him to waste, you'll see his first original lines come from a blade to his face alright The way ur living is bummy, I bet it feels like prison, ur getting played and shit isn't funny His first time on a plane, he got excited at a random check cuz he thot they were givin him money wasnt feeling This winter's cold, but the chrome I lift and point at your swollen lips is colder Ur hoe's a bitch, she's like chyeahhh, some1 needs to tell her get off the polar shift is over dooope lmao Ur poor as fuck, you rob for pennies, to get paid you just raise eagles So what little cash he actually gets is tainted....it taint his and it taint legal eh This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke lol I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news ok Sorry about ur childhood but hey life isn't fair Cuz at 17, I was playing True Crime: Streets of L.A. and you was prolly out living there eh Nobody likes you and you really need a life dude Cuz you don't just spend time irl alone, you do it on the site too ok Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction solid You've neva scored dweeb, stop actin like you givin whores d You probably only named urself witness, Cuz ur known for telling stories alright All ya rape threats is weird n makes us think ur screwed wit You created "That Awkward Moment" wayyyy before that new flick nice thought ctrl picked it up by the end but witty was a bit more consistent and harder hitting. good battle v/witty |
02-22-2014, 09:55 AM | #11 |
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My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track -- fire Stop the played rhymes or I'll cop some jail time for hate crimes, u lazy disgrace As I lay him to waste, you'll see his first original lines come from a blade to his face -- played and overworked. Cool swag tho The way ur living is bummy, I bet it feels like prison, ur getting played and shit isn't funny His first time on a plane, he got excited at a random check cuz he thot they were givin him money ---dead. Impressed This winter's cold, but the chrome I lift and point at your swollen lips is colder Ur hoe's a bitch, she's like chyeahhh, some1 needs to tell her get off the polar shift is over -- ok tuff Ur poor as fuck, you rob for pennies, to get paid you just raise eagles So what little cash he actually gets is tainted....it taint his and it taint legal -- can't lie sorta don't get it This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke --ok cntrl Was homeless when he as 17...made a thread one day saying he was the only one logged in Fox aka witness I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news ---eh Sorry about ur childhood but hey life isn't fair Cuz at 17, I was playing True Crime: Streets of L.A. and you was prolly out living there --wtf? Ur dissing him cuz u played video games while he was in the street? Damn near auto loss Nobody likes you and you really need a life dude Cuz you don't just spend time irl alone, you do it on the site too -- ok lol Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction --eh You've neva scored dweeb, stop actin like you givin whores d You probably only named urself witness, Cuz ur known for telling stories --could of been so much better All ya rape threats is weird n makes us think ur screwed wit You created "That Awkward Moment" wayyyy before that new flick --dece Witty got it
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