Aqua Velva

Vulgar · 02-19-2014, 12:27 PM

If this is 72 years later, why would Aqua Velva still be on the perfume store shelf? Just one possible flaw I saw. No biggie. Rise above the "brutes" - brutes being the cologne or aftershave scent, I'm not sure how this tackles the topic. Thanks to words, we're able to sell all different types of nostalgic fragrances. Thanks to words, we're also able to be seduced by young salesmen. So this woman cheats on her husband, then chooses not to recognize him? She doesn't identify him by scent.

Also, in the beginning you clue that the grand-daughter is rosy-cheeked, fair skinned, but then the grandpa refers to her as Sonny. I was like... wait, is she a unisex person? Nevermind, you can be a boy and be rosy-cheeked. Disregard...

Yeah I don't get this.

02-19-2014, 12:27 PM	#1
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	If this is 72 years later, why would Aqua Velva still be on the perfume store shelf? Just one possible flaw I saw. No biggie. Rise above the "brutes" - brutes being the cologne or aftershave scent, I'm not sure how this tackles the topic. Thanks to words, we're able to sell all different types of nostalgic fragrances. Thanks to words, we're also able to be seduced by young salesmen. So this woman cheats on her husband, then chooses not to recognize him? She doesn't identify him by scent. Also, in the beginning you clue that the grand-daughter is rosy-cheeked, fair skinned, but then the grandpa refers to her as Sonny. I was like... wait, is she a unisex person? Nevermind, you can be a boy and be rosy-cheeked. Disregard... Yeah I don't get this.