SEMIS: (3)Vulgar vs. (7)Lars - (LARS WINS 7-0)

Frank · 02-17-2014, 03:50 PM

Keep it brief.

Vulgar is one of a kind creative writer. His problem/gift is: he can be head scratchingly abstract. Beyond the scope of the feature picture, I don't see the slightest inkling of correlation to this topic in the least bit. I feel as though once you posted that paradoxical picture, you lost indefinitely basically forfeiting any chance of winning this. You don't add another picture to a picture battle. Probably should realistically be disqualified for breaking a golden rule of topical crusades. If I were you, I would delete that picture and force the mind to bend to the actual card playing picture before this goes into uncharted waters. This could get ugly. Dope open mic piece though. Don't know if it would matter much to be honest, this piece lars dropped was powerful. Last line was too surreal, story telling was like a flip book. The imagery and character and pacing and finale make this verse practically unbeatable in correlation to the picture.

I got Lars with the Tko

02-17-2014, 03:50 PM	#5
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Keep it brief. Vulgar is one of a kind creative writer. His problem/gift is: he can be head scratchingly abstract. Beyond the scope of the feature picture, I don't see the slightest inkling of correlation to this topic in the least bit. I feel as though once you posted that paradoxical picture, you lost indefinitely basically forfeiting any chance of winning this. You don't add another picture to a picture battle. Probably should realistically be disqualified for breaking a golden rule of topical crusades. If I were you, I would delete that picture and force the mind to bend to the actual card playing picture before this goes into uncharted waters. This could get ugly. Dope open mic piece though. Don't know if it would matter much to be honest, this piece lars dropped was powerful. Last line was too surreal, story telling was like a flip book. The imagery and character and pacing and finale make this verse practically unbeatable in correlation to the picture. I got Lars with the Tko __________________ *VETWORK* Last edited by Frank; 02-17-2014 at 03:56 PM.