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02-15-2014, 12:07 PM
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This was dope mike, i like how you stayed on the whole concept all the way through. The ness end rhyme for the furst ten got a bit repetitive but it really picked up after that. I could relate to a lot of this (besides killing my brother to become the king lol) but yea, nice read man. Stay up
If you dont mind peep my last piece and tell me what u think
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