RPK vs. Ox {RPK wins}

Sn00p · 03-11-2013, 10:23 PM

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@RPK @Ox

RPK · 03-12-2013, 09:51 AM

Czech, going 10

RPK · 03-12-2013, 05:24 PM

lets go, faggot

Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain
People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins
Ur a complete nobody,its a waste of time for me to drop u whore
I'm known for dropping vets...ur biggest achievement is getting NS'ed by GoW
This kid has a wack alias,he isn't going to be a challenge or threat
I'll simply apply the Law of Inertia...add a little force and we can lay this faggot at rest
I'm the flyest of vets,u can't match the size of my rep
I'm so confident I'll beat u...that I dropped before u even decided to check
Ox is shook to battle,he'll only drop when the thread's about to close
So is Ox a late dropper?..no,but hopefully he gets fed with one of those

Ox · 03-12-2013, 08:02 PM

my bad check work is crazy

Ox · 03-13-2013, 03:44 PM

GDLK

He's No Vet, just Ak's clone, what a lame bastard
So Why strike? if he's already a Knock off, like the gun he's named after
The scripts i direct go HAM as his just Spam & are Trollin
If anyone stops as RPK shoots, its becuz the cameras are rollin
Studyin his remains shows; how he lived was Gay
Opted to be an organ donor, so this fag given brains a dead give away
When i Bomb U Won't Sleep tight & Dream Son
Reality is, ur not a heavy hitter cuz an RPK is just a light Machine Gun
If Rpk Spits its as lethal as hockin flem, so he isn't droppin men.
He's such a Fag that his greatest joy isn't shootin guns, its cockin them

Sharp · 03-14-2013, 11:02 PM

Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain
People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins
Ox is shook to battle,he'll only drop when the thread's about to close
So is Ox a late dropper?..no,but hopefully he gets fed with one of those

vs

(The scripts i direct go HAM as his just Spam & are Trollin
If anyone stops as RPK shoots, its becuz the cameras are rollin)

RPK takes this with 2 quotables to none. Ox has some nice ideas - the one I put in parenthesis was pretty nice, and a few other ones were okay ideas that could've been executed a lot more smoothly - definitely keep at it. For now, gotta go with RPK

V/ RPK

Flow · 03-15-2013, 08:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RPK

lets go, faggot

Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain
People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins
OK
Ur a complete nobody,its a waste of time for me to drop u whore
I'm known for dropping vets...ur biggest achievement is getting NS'ed by GoW
OK - I did a similar one the other day people didnt feel it but i like it, its a simple personal thats effective
This kid has a wack alias,he isn't going to be a challenge or threat
I'll simply apply the Law of Inertia...add a little force and we can lay this faggot at rest
Didnt really feel this one
I'm the flyest of vets,u can't match the size of my rep
I'm so confident I'll beat u...that I dropped before u even decided to check
lol Its not a punch but its funny
Ox is shook to battle,he'll only drop when the thread's about to close
So is Ox a late dropper?..no,but hopefully he gets fed with one of those
OK

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ox

GDLK

He's No Vet, just Ak's clone, what a lame bastard
So Why strike? if he's already a Knock off, like the gun he's named after
nice try but no
The scripts i direct go HAM as his just Spam & are Trollin
If anyone stops as RPK shoots, its becuz the cameras are rollin
OK
Studyin his remains shows; how he lived was Gay
Opted to be an organ donor, so this fag given brains a dead give away
lol nice attempt but your wording his hurting alot of these
When i Bomb U Won't Sleep tight & Dream Son
Reality is, ur not a heavy hitter cuz an RPK is just a light Machine Gun
mmm was alright i suppose no sting though
If Rpk Spits its as lethal as hockin flem, so he isn't droppin men.
He's such a Fag that his greatest joy isn't shootin guns, its cockin them
lol so close to being a really nice close. But no.

Vote RPK - But Ox you could do well in time you have good concepts just poor delivery.

Orc · 03-15-2013, 11:24 AM

Ox won. better concepts and delivery. RPK had shit any1 could say. terrible voting

vote Ox

Witty · 03-16-2013, 09:32 AM

He's No Vet, just Ak's clone, what a lame bastard
So Why strike? if he's already a Knock off, like the gun he's named after
Lol cool
The scripts i direct go HAM as his just Spam & are Trollin
If anyone stops as RPK shoots, its becuz the cameras are rollin
Not bad
Studyin his remains shows; how he lived was Gay
Opted to be an organ donor, so this fag given brains a dead give away
Nah
When i Bomb U Won't Sleep tight & Dream Son
Reality is, ur not a heavy hitter cuz an RPK is just a light Machine Gun
Cool...u need to get off his name though
If Rpk Spits its as lethal as hockin flem, so he isn't droppin men.
He's such a Fag that his greatest joy isn't shootin guns, its cockin them
Ehhh

vs

Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain
People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins
Lol Nice
Ur a complete nobody,its a waste of time for me to drop u whore
I'm known for dropping vets...ur biggest achievement is getting NS'ed by GoW
Cool
This kid has a wack alias,he isn't going to be a challenge or threat
I'll simply apply the Law of Inertia...add a little force and we can lay this faggot at rest
Ehh
I'm the flyest of vets,u can't match the size of my rep
I'm so confident I'll beat u...that I dropped before u even decided to check
Cool I guess, not much sting
Ox is shook to battle,he'll only drop when the thread's about to close
So is Ox a late dropper?..no,but hopefully he gets fed with one of those
Nah, weakest bar imo

Going with RPK...Ox had some cool bars but he had too many nameplays, kind of got a bit old by the end, felt he could have taken other directions. RPK came pretty good, some dope and funny lines...nice verse. Cool battle.

Vote - RPK

Vinzr · 03-16-2013, 09:04 PM

Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain
People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins

vs

He's No Vet, just Ak's clone, what a lame bastard
So Why strike? if he's already a Knock off, like the gun he's named after

I thought it really came down to these 2 lines....they were the best from each verse. Peronally i didnt like how Ox kept trying to have a go with RPK's name and the gun name plays...most of em i've already seen used anyway but the opener was definitely his best one. RPK had a good opener as well, other than that i thought everything else was bland. Im gonna give this one to Ox for having the better attempts

v/ Ox

Mac · 03-16-2013, 09:53 PM

Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain
People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins
Ur a complete nobody,its a waste of time for me to drop u whore
I'm known for dropping vets...ur biggest achievement is getting NS'ed by GoW

vs

The scripts i direct go HAM as his just Spam & are Trollin
If anyone stops as RPK shoots, its becuz the cameras are rollin

ox needs to develope his execution and delivery. he tried to go ham on the nameplays but most of them are already played / not executed well, long way to go. rpk came up decent wit his 2 starting bars was enough to win this battle. gow line was funny cold veins was decent. 1sided battle here so my vote goes to rpk. continue writing.

Utmost · 03-17-2013, 01:22 AM

Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain
People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins
Ur a complete nobody,its a waste of time for me to drop u whore
I'm known for dropping vets...ur biggest achievement is getting NS'ed by GoW

vs

If Rpk Spits its as lethal as hockin flem, so he isn't droppin men.
He's such a Fag that his greatest joy isn't shootin guns, its cockin them

eh, rpk had some solid lines, first 2 really others were decent or fell flat to me. Ox showed some promise with concepts but execute well here.. i knda lold at his closer, but that was pretty much it. good show guys but

v/RPK

Origin · 03-17-2013, 02:14 AM

Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain
People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins

vs

He's No Vet, just Ak's clone, what a lame bastard
So Why strike? if he's already a Knock off, like the gun he's named after
Studyin his remains shows; how he lived was Gay
Opted to be an organ donor, so this fag given brains a dead give away
If Rpk Spits its as lethal as hockin flem, so he isn't droppin men.
He's such a Fag that his greatest joy isn't shootin guns, its cockin them

Even though 80% of Ox's verse was spent trying to nameflip, I say he takes it easy because I don't know shit about that GOW line and besides his opener, RPK wasn't landing anything.

My vote is for Ox.

Hollywood · 03-17-2013, 02:35 PM

Oxalate

vs.

LMG

ya'll both had too many wording and/or bland concept issues. some were just way too easy to think up IMO

oh and dead give away is beyond played

I preferred Oxalate over LMG in a close but shitty one

V/RPK

~RustyGunZ~ · 03-17-2013, 04:01 PM

Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain
People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins
Ox is shook to battle,he'll only drop when the thread's about to close
So is Ox a late dropper?..no,but hopefully he gets fed with one of those

cannibal ox was ill. gow line was to basic. law of interia eh. drop before u check was stupid. oxalate was cool.

vs

He's No Vet, just Ak's clone, what a lame bastard
So Why strike? if he's already a Knock off, like the gun he's named after
If Rpk Spits its as lethal as hockin flem, so he isn't droppin men.
He's such a Fag that his greatest joy isn't shootin guns, its cockin them

opener is cool, camera rolling nah. giving brains no seen to many similar ones. heavy hitter was an okay attempt just didn't deliver satisfaction. the closer was simple but i liked it haha

v/rpk
close but his hits were more creative.

03-11-2013, 10:23 PM	#1
Sn00p General German Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 1,988 Battle Record: 26-12 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Line4Line Cypher Tourney - Back2Basics - Fight Night XLVI Rep Power: 15213753	RPK vs. Ox {RPK wins} AOBL ArtofBattling.com Text Battle League Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday, March 14th 2013 11:59 PM PST. Voting ends Sunday 11:59 PM PST. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are normally 24 hours (unless requested otherwise, that is), can be no longer than 36 hours and have to be granted by your opponent. Line Limit: Min. = 10 lines Max. = 16 lines The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: Must vote on 5 battles and post your links. Post the links in the thread titled "Week 4 Voting Links". You will be punished if you don't post all 5 voting links. You will not like the punishment, so just vote so you don't have to cry later. Details about this are to be found in the "Week 4 Voting Links" thread. General Rules: 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. Feeding = DQ. Recycling = DQ. Biting = DQ. No freeposting, swaying or bitching. Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount. @RPK @Ox

03-12-2013, 09:51 AM	#2
RPK Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 227 Battle Record: 7-4 Rep Power: 38	Czech, going 10 __________________

03-12-2013, 05:24 PM	#3
RPK Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 227 Battle Record: 7-4 Rep Power: 38	lets go, faggot Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins Ur a complete nobody,its a waste of time for me to drop u whore I'm known for dropping vets...ur biggest achievement is getting NS'ed by GoW This kid has a wack alias,he isn't going to be a challenge or threat I'll simply apply the Law of Inertia...add a little force and we can lay this faggot at rest I'm the flyest of vets,u can't match the size of my rep I'm so confident I'll beat u...that I dropped before u even decided to check Ox is shook to battle,he'll only drop when the thread's about to close So is Ox a late dropper?..no,but hopefully he gets fed with one of those __________________

03-16-2013, 09:32 AM	#9
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	He's No Vet, just Ak's clone, what a lame bastard So Why strike? if he's already a Knock off, like the gun he's named after Lol cool The scripts i direct go HAM as his just Spam & are Trollin If anyone stops as RPK shoots, its becuz the cameras are rollin Not bad Studyin his remains shows; how he lived was Gay Opted to be an organ donor, so this fag given brains a dead give away Nah When i Bomb U Won't Sleep tight & Dream Son Reality is, ur not a heavy hitter cuz an RPK is just a light Machine Gun Cool...u need to get off his name though If Rpk Spits its as lethal as hockin flem, so he isn't droppin men. He's such a Fag that his greatest joy isn't shootin guns, its cockin them Ehhh vs Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins Lol Nice Ur a complete nobody,its a waste of time for me to drop u whore I'm known for dropping vets...ur biggest achievement is getting NS'ed by GoW Cool This kid has a wack alias,he isn't going to be a challenge or threat I'll simply apply the Law of Inertia...add a little force and we can lay this faggot at rest Ehh I'm the flyest of vets,u can't match the size of my rep I'm so confident I'll beat u...that I dropped before u even decided to check Cool I guess, not much sting Ox is shook to battle,he'll only drop when the thread's about to close So is Ox a late dropper?..no,but hopefully he gets fed with one of those Nah, weakest bar imo Going with RPK...Ox had some cool bars but he had too many nameplays, kind of got a bit old by the end, felt he could have taken other directions. RPK came pretty good, some dope and funny lines...nice verse. Cool battle. Vote - RPK __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

03-17-2013, 02:35 PM	#14
Hollywood Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 131 Battle Record: 6-3 Rep Power: 0	Oxalate vs. LMG ya'll both had too many wording and/or bland concept issues. some were just way too easy to think up IMO oh and dead give away is beyond played I preferred Oxalate over LMG in a close but shitty one V/RPK __________________ Dohpe

03-12-2013, 08:02 PM	#4
Ox Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 81 Battle Record: 2-6 Rep Power: 137478	my bad check work is crazy

03-13-2013, 03:44 PM	#5
Ox Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 81 Battle Record: 2-6 Rep Power: 137478	GDLK He's No Vet, just Ak's clone, what a lame bastard So Why strike? if he's already a Knock off, like the gun he's named after The scripts i direct go HAM as his just Spam & are Trollin If anyone stops as RPK shoots, its becuz the cameras are rollin Studyin his remains shows; how he lived was Gay Opted to be an organ donor, so this fag given brains a dead give away When i Bomb U Won't Sleep tight & Dream Son Reality is, ur not a heavy hitter cuz an RPK is just a light Machine Gun If Rpk Spits its as lethal as hockin flem, so he isn't droppin men. He's such a Fag that his greatest joy isn't shootin guns, its cockin them

03-14-2013, 11:02 PM	#6
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601538	Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins Ox is shook to battle,he'll only drop when the thread's about to close So is Ox a late dropper?..no,but hopefully he gets fed with one of those vs (The scripts i direct go HAM as his just Spam & are Trollin If anyone stops as RPK shoots, its becuz the cameras are rollin) RPK takes this with 2 quotables to none. Ox has some nice ideas - the one I put in parenthesis was pretty nice, and a few other ones were okay ideas that could've been executed a lot more smoothly - definitely keep at it. For now, gotta go with RPK V/ RPK

03-15-2013, 11:24 AM	#8
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	Ox won. better concepts and delivery. RPK had shit any1 could say. terrible voting vote Ox

03-16-2013, 09:04 PM	#10
Vinzr Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 86 Battle Record: 5-5 Rep Power: 137478	Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins vs He's No Vet, just Ak's clone, what a lame bastard So Why strike? if he's already a Knock off, like the gun he's named after I thought it really came down to these 2 lines....they were the best from each verse. Peronally i didnt like how Ox kept trying to have a go with RPK's name and the gun name plays...most of em i've already seen used anyway but the opener was definitely his best one. RPK had a good opener as well, other than that i thought everything else was bland. Im gonna give this one to Ox for having the better attempts v/ Ox

03-16-2013, 09:53 PM	#11
Mac Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 480 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 1856622	Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins Ur a complete nobody,its a waste of time for me to drop u whore I'm known for dropping vets...ur biggest achievement is getting NS'ed by GoW vs The scripts i direct go HAM as his just Spam & are Trollin If anyone stops as RPK shoots, its becuz the cameras are rollin ox needs to develope his execution and delivery. he tried to go ham on the nameplays but most of them are already played / not executed well, long way to go. rpk came up decent wit his 2 starting bars was enough to win this battle. gow line was funny cold veins was decent. 1sided battle here so my vote goes to rpk. continue writing.

03-17-2013, 01:22 AM	#12
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320636	Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins Ur a complete nobody,its a waste of time for me to drop u whore I'm known for dropping vets...ur biggest achievement is getting NS'ed by GoW vs If Rpk Spits its as lethal as hockin flem, so he isn't droppin men. He's such a Fag that his greatest joy isn't shootin guns, its cockin them eh, rpk had some solid lines, first 2 really others were decent or fell flat to me. Ox showed some promise with concepts but execute well here.. i knda lold at his closer, but that was pretty much it. good show guys but v/RPK

03-17-2013, 02:14 AM	#13
Origin Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 15 Battle Record: 1-0 Rep Power: 38	Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins vs He's No Vet, just Ak's clone, what a lame bastard So Why strike? if he's already a Knock off, like the gun he's named after Studyin his remains shows; how he lived was Gay Opted to be an organ donor, so this fag given brains a dead give away If Rpk Spits its as lethal as hockin flem, so he isn't droppin men. He's such a Fag that his greatest joy isn't shootin guns, its cockin them Even though 80% of Ox's verse was spent trying to nameflip, I say he takes it easy because I don't know shit about that GOW line and besides his opener, RPK wasn't landing anything. My vote is for Ox.

03-17-2013, 04:01 PM	#15
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,844 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899406	Watch me drop a dope phrase,I'm set to leave this hoe slain People know I'm a Cannibal, Ox...so its fitting that I leave u with some Cold Veins Ox is shook to battle,he'll only drop when the thread's about to close So is Ox a late dropper?..no,but hopefully he gets fed with one of those cannibal ox was ill. gow line was to basic. law of interia eh. drop before u check was stupid. oxalate was cool. vs He's No Vet, just Ak's clone, what a lame bastard So Why strike? if he's already a Knock off, like the gun he's named after If Rpk Spits its as lethal as hockin flem, so he isn't droppin men. He's such a Fag that his greatest joy isn't shootin guns, its cockin them opener is cool, camera rolling nah. giving brains no seen to many similar ones. heavy hitter was an okay attempt just didn't deliver satisfaction. the closer was simple but i liked it haha v/rpk close but his hits were more creative.