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02-13-2014, 04:03 AM
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This is the best I've seen from you yet H4ZE, a standard verse here. 4 opening lines started it off fresh, seems you also have straightened out your rhymes while expressing the content in a clear and easy way. Overall this is somewhere between average and decent, you have the basics down and now you should focus on advancing your own style to it, making your pieces more original and interesting. Stay up.
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