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Old 02-09-2014, 08:22 PM   #12
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Lyrically I felt what you put into it but wasn't really enjoying the flow. Felt like a spiral of repetitious meaning slandered with chaos. Not a diss, just how I picture it. I really enjoyed
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vilification, sensitive angels, simple equation
for ruling a nation - privilege, patience, business acquaintances
move or stagnation. be the victim or run
pretty to the point, positive influence but a negative take on it; that's what I feel when I play it outloud.

Toward
Quote:
lonely marauder. Self complexities divided to conquer
it picks up and get's me into the groove. But the beginning I felt didn't really belong. Nice work man, mind dropping my mic a peep? http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=51757
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