AOWL Week 4: Red glare (1-1) VS. Innovator (2-1) [RED GLARE WINS, 4-3.]

[Adonis]

Innovater - To be completely honest, I wasn't a fan of your verse at all bro. I mean, it flowed, but honestly I know guys who freestyle that shit and quite frankly, do better as far as content goes. You used multi's quite a bit which I love, but yours seemed generic... axe bitch, axis kid, activist... Sure they don't sound horrible while reading, but they don't truly flow IMO. I also thought there were word errors such as catalysis, I mean I guess it could make sense but only as a stretch. Then the Chorus... IDK, I know most people flexed this week given the topic, I just feel like you literally rapped about nothing other then you saying your better then everyone else...this verse didn't prove so. Sorry for coming off like an ASS, not my intentions but I value honesty for elevation purposes.

Red Glare - I loved the first two bars, the 2nd being the bar of this battle with ease. This was a short story, very short, about your friend who had a wife and baby but the wife was murdered? I feel like this was key'd up very quick, there was much to be desired. It flowed with the beat OK, but the "shutter and shout" threw off the flow quick. Surely you could have found a synonym of either that rhymed and fit the previous lines syllable count. IDK

Vote - Red Glare - What I'm about to say is Ironic, but I felt Glare's verse was more complete. He had meat to his verse, it had direction, however not much, but it went somewhere and gave me a bit of emotion, not much but some, and meant something. While reading his counterparts verse I began and finished and didn't think twice about it and probably won't . It was just something else I read today.