AOWL Week 4: Vinzr (1-0) VS. TYSON (1-1) [VINZR WINS, 4-2.]

Split · 03-11-2013, 02:13 PM

Tyson.. Can definitely feel the connection, whether u intended or not it rolled w/ the beat. 3rd to 5th lines were fire as fuck, imagery was cool and you never strayed from the topic at all.. It was clear and powerful, wish u woulda used that chorus and gone for a closer, this beat was made for longer lyrics...

Vinzr.. "Eyes bolted in" was cool af. A lot of the words u used kinda broke up the flow more than carried it, like "purpose" "blank face" "mount him down" all stuck out like crags rather than rapids. Delivery wasn't awkward just off tempo, it felt less connected to and less inspired by the topic than Tyson's piece by a long shot. Not a bad verse, just outmatched this day

V/ tyson

03-11-2013, 02:13 PM	#12
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	Tyson.. Can definitely feel the connection, whether u intended or not it rolled w/ the beat. 3rd to 5th lines were fire as fuck, imagery was cool and you never strayed from the topic at all.. It was clear and powerful, wish u woulda used that chorus and gone for a closer, this beat was made for longer lyrics... Vinzr.. "Eyes bolted in" was cool af. A lot of the words u used kinda broke up the flow more than carried it, like "purpose" "blank face" "mount him down" all stuck out like crags rather than rapids. Delivery wasn't awkward just off tempo, it felt less connected to and less inspired by the topic than Tyson's piece by a long shot. Not a bad verse, just outmatched this day V/ tyson __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com