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Join Date: Jan 2013
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@Tic Tac as promised
It's embarrassing bro, in that Champ Match we saw Bobbypin Sharp like Tacs were exposed You're wack 'n it shows, that loss doesn't just stick out like a Sore Thumb, more like Kapernick's nose He's the faggy type, he writes hard but no one believes it like Nappy whites He'll never last in fights, cuz after one punch he'll Brews worse than Natty Ice There comes a Point where whatever Sharpen remains dull, never Sharp as a Tac His attempts to impress end up like his career, cuz last time he tried leavin a Market collapsed* --- stick out... The nose thing makes it ehh, too simple, the brews/ bruise wordplay is played but ur flip was effective and kinda worked --- never explain a punch, if u feel u have the need to, it's either not worded good enough or it's a stretch I knew this prick was a fag when he started giving Certain gestures But I swear I never thought I'd see rhymes & concepts played worse than Denver I'm not sure which you'll get 1st, a girl or proper voting links Cuz the only time he'll get Pinky up is a night out w/Orc holding drinks --play u like a sport line, too obvious and played.. --the pinky line just doesn't really hit him, it's more of a shot at Orc Basically it's all about wording with a fresh take... If the concept has been done before u better have an extra fresh take on it for it to work Let me know if u have any questions
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