AOWL Week 4: IAmBenT (0-0) VS. Ink (0-0) [IAMBENT WINS, 5-2.]

Split · 03-11-2013, 12:36 AM

Awesome battle..

IamBent- flow off the charts... Not flawless but fucking top notch, the story put me off a but until the end when it kinda validated all this emotion, like when you prod around too much in someone's business and learn the truth.. Imagery was dope as well.
It worked its the beat and def matched the tone

Ink. The characterization of your narrator as selfish but self-aware was interesting.. A more hopelessly hopeless take n a depressing topic., like I felt less faith n humanity after reading your verse. I liked how your verse was reflecting on one desolation over another, like a two-toned image of North Korea.

V/Ink. IamBenT had awesome lyricism but I got really captured by Ink's verse this week, found myself remembering images of it a few hours later which is rare

03-11-2013, 12:36 AM	#1
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	Awesome battle.. IamBent- flow off the charts... Not flawless but fucking top notch, the story put me off a but until the end when it kinda validated all this emotion, like when you prod around too much in someone's business and learn the truth.. Imagery was dope as well. It worked its the beat and def matched the tone Ink. The characterization of your narrator as selfish but self-aware was interesting.. A more hopelessly hopeless take n a depressing topic., like I felt less faith n humanity after reading your verse. I liked how your verse was reflecting on one desolation over another, like a two-toned image of North Korea. V/Ink. IamBenT had awesome lyricism but I got really captured by Ink's verse this week, found myself remembering images of it a few hours later which is rare __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com