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Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 3,591
Battle Record: 29-25
Champed - Writing Challenge League I
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nice battle fellas.
Adonis- I was impressed with your verse. first stuff I read from you. nice flow and it was easy to read but contained a fairly complex structure. good job. nice direction. the second part I didn't love but ya overall the whole verse just seemed way too short. stretch it out next time. pryde- good stuff. nice flow. that opening bar was cool. I feel like you possibly wasted some space with the repetitive lines. and your was also short overall- it was fairly close. both took the same direction but I enjoyed Adonis verse more. was a bit more complex and kept my attention a little more. good battle. |
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