ROUND TWO: (3)Vulgar vs. (14)Split Eight - (VULGAR WINS 6-3)

Nigma · 01-27-2014, 05:05 PM

With an open topic like this and the creative mind of writers I was excited to see where both of you would take this. Was not let down.

Vulgar writing on a reminiscent mobster.. Yes please. Split Nine, I haven't haven't read anything from you so long that I really didn't want to expect, however from the growth you've undergone it's clear that you are no longer the Sharp Eight I've forgetten anyways. I feel you implemented actual fragments of your past in this, the schooling parts felt like you were pulling events from the past rather then making them up. Iunno though, I have to leave for work like 5 mins ago and am sitting here at a loss of who to vote for. As far as relation to the topic neither really ran away with it, two stellar verses, I guess I related more with Vulgars verse, with the character confliction, and with the character he created overall. This is just a rushed rambled vote and you both deserve something more well thought out so sry, but yeah, yeah. Yeah.

+1 Vulgar

01-27-2014, 05:05 PM	#9
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	With an open topic like this and the creative mind of writers I was excited to see where both of you would take this. Was not let down. Vulgar writing on a reminiscent mobster.. Yes please. Split Nine, I haven't haven't read anything from you so long that I really didn't want to expect, however from the growth you've undergone it's clear that you are no longer the Sharp Eight I've forgetten anyways. I feel you implemented actual fragments of your past in this, the schooling parts felt like you were pulling events from the past rather then making them up. Iunno though, I have to leave for work like 5 mins ago and am sitting here at a loss of who to vote for. As far as relation to the topic neither really ran away with it, two stellar verses, I guess I related more with Vulgars verse, with the character confliction, and with the character he created overall. This is just a rushed rambled vote and you both deserve something more well thought out so sry, but yeah, yeah. Yeah. +1 Vulgar __________________