01-27-2014, 02:50 PM | #1 |
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JontheDon (0-1) vs God of War (0-1) - GOD OF WAR WINS
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01-27-2014, 05:52 PM | #2 |
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how am I 0-1 damn u sharp
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01-27-2014, 06:11 PM | #3 |
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01-28-2014, 12:13 AM | #4 |
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01-31-2014, 09:43 PM | #6 |
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sup apex
ur pro homosexual in real life, on the boards u deny it fast quick but if we put 2 and 2 together, we know ull always be down four that fag shit plus ull never matter bitch, so u shouldnt test the badder kids cuz i got a loaded hollow, that'll drop you faster then that battle did you biting ur names a joke, but ull never be that dope dawg if we put a john in front of this fag, hed charge em 20 for a blowjob your alias is a gimmick dude, its nothing to finish you its funny you went from Apex, to the bottom of my tennis shoes see i still rep bars, cats expect scars, when i spit lines that'll take down any image u have, like the host did to this site |
02-01-2014, 01:40 AM | #7 |
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Didn't wanna no show
Sup country Plz ya plot got X'd out, god of what? son u aint on top N u the landlord... of this shit.. no wonder the property values shot Wifeys a thot,blows me n tells me how her attempts on ur life goes Cuz she wanted 2 give warhead, n put just that under his pillow My activities allow me 2 win dow, I blow chesse N when he...GOWs 2 window, Its another suicide attempt from 20 stories He be active on the sites day n night trying 2 save em for filling its needs But I just ask, we knw u got bar, soap just use it 2 wash ur ass plz U pushin keys? LOL, u gettin cheeks? Lls a bitch u aint smashin Cuz every time we tune in 2 country, ur guaranteed 2 see a bunch of SQUARES dancin
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02-02-2014, 04:42 PM | #8 |
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GOW- Opener was alright, but it may or may not be true, deffo taking away from the punch. Nice punchline though, 2and2 was alright. Smooth ass transition on the next bar, using the internals, but you didn't really hit him with a personal. A nice punch. The next bar had some average multi's but the set-up was stronger than the punch! Next bar had some dope ass multi's but not a true/good personal to be found! Next bar's setup was complete selfhype filler bullshit, but you know, the personal was OK. Deffo too average/ plain, I want to be excited. 7/10
Tha Don- First bar was alright, didn't get the reference though. You need to try to find a personal or something on your opponent. The next bars multi's weren't that good, because the the first syllables didnt rhyme like they should have. Pill and Life does not rhyme. The next bar didnt have a multi in it either, it was an OK punch. Next bar had an attempted punch, deffo not any good though. Closer was OK, prolly your best bar, and it wasn't even that good. 3/10 My Vote Goes To: GOW for having some better punches |
02-02-2014, 08:21 PM | #9 |
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GOW gets this... blowjob line was LOTB . I have seen GOW go harder than this.before but.his verse decent. Jon I feel like your verse was worded pretty badly and it made it difficult for me too read it and that makes it less effective. I see that you have some decent concepts but they were not constructed in a way that made them hit..decent battle I guess but it was one sided.
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02-03-2014, 09:13 AM | #10 |
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you biting ur names a joke, but ull never be that dope dawg
if we put a john in front of this fag, hed charge em 20 for a blowjob your alias is a gimmick dude, its nothing to finish you its funny you went from Apex, to the bottom of my tennis shoes vs nothing Jon seemed rushed and GOW seems a lil rusty...still more than enough for the win v/GOW
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02-03-2014, 04:49 PM | #11 |
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plus ull never matter bitch, so u shouldnt test the badder kids
cuz i got a loaded hollow, that'll drop you faster then that battle did your alias is a gimmick dude, its nothing to finish you its funny you went from Apex, to the bottom of my tennis shoes see i still rep bars, cats expect scars, when i spit lines that'll take down any image u have, like the host did to this site Plz ya plot got X'd out, god of what? son u aint on top N u the landlord... of this shit.. no wonder the property values shot jon was kind of rushed, gow did his thing. alright battle but gow got it v/god |
02-03-2014, 05:16 PM | #12 |
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jon admitted he keyed and it showed. closer was still kinda aite imo. rest was lacking tho. but u probably know that urself. props on still showing up. gow had a lot really well-executed concepts. a few of 'em might've been on the simple side, but the wording made them hit. so yea. gow gets this on consistency and standouts.
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02-03-2014, 07:05 PM | #13 |
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V/gow...i didn't like gows opener or closer but his other 3 bars were cool and hit...Jon almost had warhead the others I wasn't feeling tbh....i know Jon is better than this it seems rushed
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02-03-2014, 08:04 PM | #14 |
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Loaded hollow, blowjob, and tennis shoes line from gow were dope. I liked Jon's opener but that's about it from him. Jon had some potential to win this and it wasn't gows best but he did enough. Decent battle.
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