ROUND TWO: (R)oats vs. (R)uh-oh - (OATS WINS 5-0)

NYCSPITZ · 01-27-2014, 01:12 PM

uh oh was dope, reminds me of history or latin from HS. I like that type of shit and I think it played to your strengths. In a pure hairy balls roar competition you might be king, but in the topical sense you still hold it down. I don't like the all caps but your shit has swag to it. Good piece.

oats was dope, imagery on point like a motherfucker slumbering id woah. Good depiction of human evolution's waves and the self's idosyncracies. Great command of the author subjective, ending was profound and I was feelin it all the way through. Oats won it imo.

V/ oats

01-27-2014, 01:12 PM	#8
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	uh oh was dope, reminds me of history or latin from HS. I like that type of shit and I think it played to your strengths. In a pure hairy balls roar competition you might be king, but in the topical sense you still hold it down. I don't like the all caps but your shit has swag to it. Good piece. oats was dope, imagery on point like a motherfucker slumbering id woah. Good depiction of human evolution's waves and the self's idosyncracies. Great command of the author subjective, ending was profound and I was feelin it all the way through. Oats won it imo. V/ oats __________________ UNIFIED THEORY