ROUND TWO: (1)dead man vs. (17)Witty - (DEAD MAN WINS 5-0)

NYCSPITZ · 01-27-2014, 12:04 PM

Witty this was dope brah, truly the mark of a champion's pen. I thought the extended descriptions of the man's suffering was a bit overdone, but other than that it was a well written, compelling story, although I have seen you write much better. As far as deadman, it carried profound sentiments, flowed wonderfully and rang true with reality's weight. Another great verse and I think he took it comfortably this time, but thanks for the read yo.

v/ black

01-27-2014, 12:04 PM	#7
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	Witty this was dope brah, truly the mark of a champion's pen. I thought the extended descriptions of the man's suffering was a bit overdone, but other than that it was a well written, compelling story, although I have seen you write much better. As far as deadman, it carried profound sentiments, flowed wonderfully and rang true with reality's weight. Another great verse and I think he took it comfortably this time, but thanks for the read yo. v/ black __________________ UNIFIED THEORY