ROUND TWO: (3)Vulgar vs. (14)Split Eight - (VULGAR WINS 6-3)

[Lars]

Split: I loved the style, the shorter bar format has always been one of my favourites, I loved that this came full-circle almost in both pieces, Split had quite a punchliney style to his drop that I could also appreciate a lot. 'University Streets' was a dope little idea summed up perfectly in two lines. Thrown off some caps made me laugh, again, there's some subtle humour there to contrast the serious subject matter at hand.

So it was folly, he feared, that he pledged his life
to the art of surviving, and felt so far from alive

That was a dope couplet. All in all a solid verse. Good job.

Vulg: This started off dope, loved the imagery and character development at the beginning, l I felt you could have done so much more to develop him further and flesh it out though. It was a sketch, very brief, felt like you were pressed for time this week and had to get it down quick. I felt a bit like I got sold a Sopranos style ending here with it fading to black and me not really knowing what happened to Tony, you know? I fucking hateeeeeedddddddddddddddd that shit when it happened. I dunno. I've got Vulg with the better story per se, just it felt short and clipped at the ending which was an anti climax for me, Split's was short but sweet with an intellectual bow tied to the end andlittle honey sweets along the way like a Hansel and Gretel trail. Unfortunately for Vulgar, I'm fat. I'm going against the grain here and giving this to Split.