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whatup fice it's black. good to see you brother.
definitely felt the track and the writing alike. definitely clipped and adjusted to a more metronome friendly version of what I'm used to reading from you but thats the nature of song i suppose. i would be interested in a more free verse spoken word reading of a work of yours. emphasis would be on delivery and pacing but it could be pretty immense of done correctly.. I stay damned, no belief in a Beast, only serpents on the surface burning freedom for peace. I mean I'm diseased, out of focus and balance. Still chasing. No Truth, no Opus allowed. Still racing, feet to my knees. Hope in the clouds. this was a dope line if not a bit contradictory on the surface. the hook was cool too. kept a decent melody can't say much for your singing chops though lol. this felt like a self-aware motivational anthem of sorts. i dug it man. again, good to see you around and creating still. thanks 1
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