Rayge vs. WRATH {Rayge wins}

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@Rayge @WRATH

[Maximus]

10 playa

[WRATH]

CHECK

[Maximus]

U're this site's biggest FAG and u'll get buried soon i squeeze the gauge
But forget putting u to sleep in a grave when u just wanna sleep with Grave
Its a massacre and u're dying tonite cos no one thinks ur rap's clever
u'll be carried off by a Paul Bearer when i leave u dead faster than dat wrestler
Fronting like a thug who bust shots but u're a pussy with no undresser
When this League is the only time u're seen around a Mac and a Beretta
u always spew crap, its nothing for me to get ur wig pushed back
i dont need any form of therapy or anger management to subdue Wrath
this talentless prick aint surviving my jabs, every punch cracks mugs
forget Jeru's album. If theres a Wrath Of Da Math, he's mad his skill doesnt add up

[WRATH]

rayge a fucking moron, fuckboy and so on
woulda loved a no show win, but oh was he so wrong
with such a misleading name you would think ol boy a rider
but only time he raise his voice is to karaoke some mariah
shit....... if rayge don't suck then kobe ain't clutch
i don't bang sluts that overuse makeup rick james waked up and hova bankrupt
you don't wear tighty whiteys on the daily and make bucks
and even your hair can pass for a properly done shape up
me no show? oh no, somebody tell bro he better learn
cause i'll son ray so bad no amount of spf will protect him from the burns

[Sharp]

Mac and beretta, jeru

V

Nothing

lold at Mariah

But wrath doesn't quite get the style yet. Keep at it, leagues can do a lot for learning in text. Rayge on the other hand did his thing, not his best but more than he needed

V/ Rayge

[bleak]

Mac n B, Wrath of the Math

Nothing spectacular but a steady verse throughout.

vs.

Nothing

Sun ray could have been flipped better, most of your punches were statements. Keep it simple and let your concept do the work. You still have a ways to go, but you get the idea.

V/Rayge

[Allen Knight]

Fronting like a thug who bust shots but u're a pussy with no undresser
When this League is the only time u're seen around a Mac and a Beretta
u always spew crap, its nothing for me to get ur wig pushed back
i dont need any form of therapy or anger management to subdue Wrath

Vs

me no show? oh no, somebody tell bro he better learn
cause i'll son ray so bad no amount of spf will protect him from the burns

V/rayge, he took this, wrath u have the idea but u need to work on wording an concepts. that bar i quoted was
cool the ray concept is played on him but it was flipped cool but the rest was just statements work on that. ray
had a solid verse wit some cool bars took this easy imo, props yah'll.

[Witty]

U're this site's biggest FAG and u'll get buried soon i squeeze the gauge
But forget putting u to sleep in a grave when u just wanna sleep with Grave
This is obviously a personal, but I don't the the history so didn't do much for me
Its a massacre and u're dying tonite cos no one thinks ur rap's clever
u'll be carried off by a Paul Bearer when i leave u dead faster than dat wrestler
Ehhh, he wasn't a wrestler for a start lol not bad though...not brilliant either
Fronting like a thug who bust shots but u're a pussy with no undresser
When this League is the only time u're seen around a Mac and a Beretta
Cool
u always spew crap, its nothing for me to get ur wig pushed back
i dont need any form of therapy or anger management to subdue Wrath
Kinda simple, decent though
this talentless prick aint surviving my jabs, every punch cracks mugs
forget Jeru's album. If theres a Wrath Of Da Math, he's mad his skill doesnt add up
ok

vs

rayge a fucking moron, fuckboy and so on
woulda loved a no show win, but oh was he so wrong
No, way too simple
with such a misleading name you would think ol boy a rider
but only time he raise his voice is to karaoke some mariah
not feeling it
shit....... if rayge don't suck then kobe ain't clutch
i don't bang sluts that overuse makeup rick james waked up and hova bankrupt
Decent
you don't wear tighty whiteys on the daily and make bucks
and even your hair can pass for a properly done shape up
nah
me no show? oh no, somebody tell bro he better learn
cause i'll son ray so bad no amount of spf will protect him from the burns
decent idea, wording sucked though

Rayge got this, Wrath was just too simple in both concepts and wording...I think with a bit more thought and wit he could be pretty good. Rayge didn't really blow me away either tbh but his verse was a lot more solid, concepts were cleverer.

Vote - Rayge

[El Muffin]

U're this site's biggest FAG and u'll get buried soon i squeeze the gauge
But forget putting u to sleep in a grave when u just wanna sleep with Grave
Fronting like a thug who bust shots but u're a pussy with no undresser
When this League is the only time u're seen around a Mac and a Beretta

subdue wrath was predictable..believe it or not but when we battled i had a similar line for you (rayge) but figured it was too simplistic to use


hmm wraths verse wasnt awful..just not something im use to seeing..i like how you delivered the hova/rick james shit but it wasnt that powerful..just made me chuckle kinda

same with the mariah shit..thought that was actually pretty good ..again made me chuckle

son ray was decent

i got rayge here but wasnt a bad read by both by no means..wrath keep at it..i like your sense of humor

v/rayge

[Hollywood]

Paul Bearer, Mac & Beretta

vs.

raise his voice

kind've close, V/Rayge. Wrath has potential though

[RPK]

Fronting like a thug who bust shots but u're a pussy with no undresser
When this League is the only time u're seen around a Mac and a Beretta
u always spew crap, its nothing for me to get ur wig pushed back
i dont need any form of therapy or anger management to subdue Wrath
this talentless prick aint surviving my jabs, every punch cracks mugs
forget Jeru's album. If theres a Wrath Of Da Math, he's mad his skill doesnt add up

vs.

Nothing

I thought most of the stuff in Rayge's verse hit. Wrath has concepts but needs to find his wording.
V/Rayge