ROUND ONE: (6)Soulstice vs. (R)uh-oh - (UH-OH WINS 9-5)

Diode · 01-19-2014, 01:38 PM

FIRST OFF: NOBODY WANTS TO DISCUSS THE COMICALLY LARGE DARK HELMET ON THIS GUY?

soulstice:

first stanza: nothing to do with the picture
second stanza: nothing to do with the picture
third stanza: nothing to do with the picture

do you see a trend?

fourth stanza: beginning to think the journey we are taking is an allegory for the rising, falling, sweeping path of this hill. god, but it is so loosely connected though. i think you had this written and worked in the travel through the already-built city and its occupants to make it fit the photo.

fifth: reverse game of thrones. okay.

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uhoh:

straightforward take into the ethereal story behind our mysterious subject. short, quick, to the point. this was actually far less detailed / technical writing than you've provided in the past. however, altogether it worked in its sheer simplicity. you addressed the photo and gave it something more powerful than "guy on a hill". nyc probably could have gotten away with that, but not many people are him. i think you did just enough. you aren't the technical writer, storyteller, or literary master that soulstice is.. but he so obviously shoehorned an unrelated tale into this picture that i honestly can't give him a win here. this is a topical league. incorporate the topic. if soulstice had done that, it probably would have been an easy victory. he didn't.

v/ uh-oh

01-19-2014, 01:38 PM	#16
Diode PR's Finest Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 14,165 Battle Record: 12-7 Rep Power: 85899410	FIRST OFF: NOBODY WANTS TO DISCUSS THE COMICALLY LARGE DARK HELMET ON THIS GUY? soulstice: first stanza: nothing to do with the picture second stanza: nothing to do with the picture third stanza: nothing to do with the picture do you see a trend? fourth stanza: beginning to think the journey we are taking is an allegory for the rising, falling, sweeping path of this hill. god, but it is so loosely connected though. i think you had this written and worked in the travel through the already-built city and its occupants to make it fit the photo. fifth: reverse game of thrones. okay. -- uhoh: straightforward take into the ethereal story behind our mysterious subject. short, quick, to the point. this was actually far less detailed / technical writing than you've provided in the past. however, altogether it worked in its sheer simplicity. you addressed the photo and gave it something more powerful than "guy on a hill". nyc probably could have gotten away with that, but not many people are him. i think you did just enough. you aren't the technical writer, storyteller, or literary master that soulstice is.. but he so obviously shoehorned an unrelated tale into this picture that i honestly can't give him a win here. this is a topical league. incorporate the topic. if soulstice had done that, it probably would have been an easy victory. he didn't. v/ uh-oh __________________ Last edited by Diode; 01-19-2014 at 01:42 PM.