Joe Boston vs Rayge RAYGE WINS

zygote · 03-08-2013, 10:21 AM

Rayge was better in most areas except for the last line which was made unintentionally comical because of "da 4th book of da Bible." Can not comment for the aggressiveness of the diss lines from Joe Boston because they are inside/obscure references but the last 4 lines were the highlight of your writing, E.g., "I know this dude won't bust he ain't around violence that often " this was a good line, perhaps you should have wrote more lines like that. Overall, voted for Rayge based on the 2 best lines "Asteroid in Russia" + "Get elected."

03-08-2013, 10:21 AM	#19
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 501 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737828	Rayge was better in most areas except for the last line which was made unintentionally comical because of "da 4th book of da Bible." Can not comment for the aggressiveness of the diss lines from Joe Boston because they are inside/obscure references but the last 4 lines were the highlight of your writing, E.g., "I know this dude won't bust he ain't around violence that often " this was a good line, perhaps you should have wrote more lines like that. Overall, voted for Rayge based on the 2 best lines "Asteroid in Russia" + "Get elected."