Forbidden Love

H4ZE · 01-18-2014, 04:46 PM

First verse for a song im working on with a girl from my school that sings.

Forbidden Love:

The essence of your beauty, is something I've never seen before
Restless nights spent thinking of you, and its completely wrong
I believed and thought..one day we'd maybe be a couple
Now I realize that we cant...so I lay these words and crumble
I break down and I cry, you wont get out of my mind
At the mention of your name, my face frowns every time
I love you..but you don't love me, its worse than I thought
I turn and I toss, your words are like a curse that I've got
I wish I could cure it but nah, the things you say haunt me
When I'm not with you, I'm out of place and my brain just thinks awfully
Meeting you, changed my whole outlook on life
Now seeing you, makes me wanna fall down and cry
Because the love I have for you,gets no love in return
And that's something I yearn,for,sometimes loving can hurt
I Thought we were meant to be back then, but we were forced into stuff
Now you loving me could never happen, that's why its called forbidden love

Feed would be greatly appreciated

H4ZE · 02-07-2014, 12:03 PM

-_- this got no feed

Ryan 12 · 02-07-2014, 02:49 PM

ill feed this later

01-18-2014, 04:46 PM	#1
H4ZE Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Florida Posts: 77 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	Forbidden Love First verse for a song im working on with a girl from my school that sings. Forbidden Love: The essence of your beauty, is something I've never seen before Restless nights spent thinking of you, and its completely wrong I believed and thought..one day we'd maybe be a couple Now I realize that we cant...so I lay these words and crumble I break down and I cry, you wont get out of my mind At the mention of your name, my face frowns every time I love you..but you don't love me, its worse than I thought I turn and I toss, your words are like a curse that I've got I wish I could cure it but nah, the things you say haunt me When I'm not with you, I'm out of place and my brain just thinks awfully Meeting you, changed my whole outlook on life Now seeing you, makes me wanna fall down and cry Because the love I have for you,gets no love in return And that's something I yearn,for,sometimes loving can hurt I Thought we were meant to be back then, but we were forced into stuff Now you loving me could never happen, that's why its called forbidden love Feed would be greatly appreciated

02-07-2014, 12:03 PM	#2
H4ZE Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Florida Posts: 77 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	-_- this got no feed

02-07-2014, 02:49 PM	#3
Ryan 12 Worst of the worst Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 1,014 Battle Record: 6-1 Rep Power: 7026	ill feed this later