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oh
well i respect your writing to some degree. more than your Disc persona. i just never felt your swag n flow verses, too smart while wanting to seem not smart, like a basic grasp of smart concepts you painted hood rich faux chrome. just be yourself rawn
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rhyme capsule.
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not that i've seen, at least. i give you a bly, rawn. your verse with cherry was pretty good. |
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The COAT...
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@Witty I enjoy your sense of humor, id never upset a fox
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....Hakuna Matata....
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biggest complaint would be weird grammar/ word combinations (they clout) and occasionally weirdly out of sync concepts (pushing rock around town like Sisyphus... Sisyphus was a dumb bitch tho so it looks like youre calling yourself a martyr or w/e dumb shit he did) I'd say a lot of your problems could be fixed if you stopped cutting necessary words out for brevity
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@Split Eight black and igloo carried him on one, and i think the other was, somehow, for a site-wide collab which he started but offered a wack verse for. idk.
that would be fine. honestly. if it weren't bragged about like 'YEA. SCRUB. LOOK AT MY ACCOMPLISHMENTS. I WON AN FN AND LITERALLY CARRIED THE WATER FOR THESE OTHER MEDALS. ADAM SANDLER ASS NIGGA. FUCK YA'LL IF YA'LL DOUBT ME.' which i'm sure i've seen. y'know. still getting the hang of that tag thing. p.s. Sisyphus wanted to rape his niece. |
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I'm a Lord, and I'm super ill with rhymez
Kinda bored, doing a poop to kill the time
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Over analyzing the base concept was pushing the rock
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Talkin of pushin the rock, I think this dookie is blocked
Uhhhhh....cookie and cock.
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rawn i think youre trivializing sisyphus
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Dunno what sisyphus means, my penis is syphilis green
When Katy Perry is on tv i press my dick to the screen
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Bars like the kinda ones where Lars fights
Giving bitches scars with hard rights
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obsessed
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- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
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- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
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- related to genghis khan
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confident. i like it. not bad.
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obsessed
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Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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for da big baby record i eat lil babies for snf breakfast. i hear snf and have 2 watch on the sidelines like jordan during a laker game, rubbing my baby beard, saying, 'intriguing' under my breath.
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Fig crazy cuz he no showed da big baby
Been sick lately, foaming at the mouth, i spit rabies
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I watched one of those military parent surprise coming home videos last night. Got a little dusty in the Pancake dungeon.
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