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03-08-2013, 01:18 AM
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The COAT...
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: BC, Canada
Posts: 1,723
Battle Record: 28-20
Champed - Art of Writing League (x3)
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Nice drop man. Was digging the flow, stayed consistent throughout. A couple standout lines. I really enjoyed the animal wordplays/extended metaphor towards the end. The 'burning sheets till my urn exceeds' line was fresh too. Not much to critique here, solid drop!
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