monika,

Exis · 01-17-2014, 12:34 AM

Chea this was fuckin' good man...I thought I fed this and yeah, cocaine is a hell of a drug lol, I remember readin' it though..but whichever what way it's my loss for not gettin' at this sooner.There was a joint you did with Wise a while back (before netcees couldn't afford to have the dot com at the end of the addy) that I wasn't feelin', well haven't times changed...it's like you've really come into your own now, discovered your ability and dropped a bomb on us with this, your wordin' has really improved...not sayin' it was shit but sometimes your word usage had me scratchin' my head alot thinkin' am I missin' sumthin' or am I that dense to understand it...this is an impressive write up my friend and you've come leaps and bounds like Certain said, your one of my favourites to read now and I encourage you to submit way more than you do fa real...you have an unusual/awkward style which is very original and when you let shit rip it turns out extremely dope Split.

Here's what I liked,

you said photographs were the purest art-
to capture untethered human emotive conviction,
and showed me restaurant scenes- 'open incisions'-
The photographer, ensconced in oceans of pixels,
is the purity seeked. Motion is fixed for his or her Copernican leap.
But the viewer's de jure devotion is decomposure of scene-

^^Great imagery.

The glassy tablet a megaphone. Rosetta Stone Air.
twenty characters to echo- rote silken robe for networking flairs.
captioning stalactites to adjective life- its amenities bare,
translating pictures to blurbs with maddening slight-

^^Dope.

she joked I was haunted by ghosts. American slew.
Engorged in oblivion. Kerouac. Whitman. Bloo Q. Kazoo.
Morrison's indian. Cobain, sky a typeset cobaltic,
cloud-cover stardust in bloom, reining in acidic cathodics,
Sitting cathartic. Carcinogen fumes we could puff.
Aware that my tonal grasp was approximately, too not enough.

^^Tightness.

Thought you closed it out brilliantly also, loved it...loved the whole thing fam.

Stay upwards.

01-17-2014, 12:34 AM	#1
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Chea this was fuckin' good man...I thought I fed this and yeah, cocaine is a hell of a drug lol, I remember readin' it though..but whichever what way it's my loss for not gettin' at this sooner.There was a joint you did with Wise a while back (before netcees couldn't afford to have the dot com at the end of the addy) that I wasn't feelin', well haven't times changed...it's like you've really come into your own now, discovered your ability and dropped a bomb on us with this, your wordin' has really improved...not sayin' it was shit but sometimes your word usage had me scratchin' my head alot thinkin' am I missin' sumthin' or am I that dense to understand it...this is an impressive write up my friend and you've come leaps and bounds like Certain said, your one of my favourites to read now and I encourage you to submit way more than you do fa real...you have an unusual/awkward style which is very original and when you let shit rip it turns out extremely dope Split. Here's what I liked, you said photographs were the purest art- to capture untethered human emotive conviction, and showed me restaurant scenes- 'open incisions'- The photographer, ensconced in oceans of pixels, is the purity seeked. Motion is fixed for his or her Copernican leap. But the viewer's de jure devotion is decomposure of scene- ^^Great imagery. The glassy tablet a megaphone. Rosetta Stone Air. twenty characters to echo- rote silken robe for networking flairs. captioning stalactites to adjective life- its amenities bare, translating pictures to blurbs with maddening slight- ^^Dope. she joked I was haunted by ghosts. American slew. Engorged in oblivion. Kerouac. Whitman. Bloo Q. Kazoo. Morrison's indian. Cobain, sky a typeset cobaltic, cloud-cover stardust in bloom, reining in acidic cathodics, Sitting cathartic. Carcinogen fumes we could puff. Aware that my tonal grasp was approximately, too not enough. ^^Tightness. Thought you closed it out brilliantly also, loved it...loved the whole thing fam. Stay upwards.