Sharp Nine vs. Witty {Sharp Nine wins}

Utmost · 03-07-2013, 09:01 PM

I've already won, so when I buck - blast - see him run fast
Sharp Nine? Guns are for shooting, not stabbing....dumbass
This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit
So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped

vs

chicks hate you, they go for this clever chap instead
ya girl fell for my 'pronounced wit'... so she never did that in bed
text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started
My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is
we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun
Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone

Witty, ur opener was cool. when its said aloud it sounds better, than it actually reads. made me lol tho
stan shadys been down but i like how you flipped it with a nameplay.. closer coulda been nicer if it had been executed better. not a bad verse, rest of the lines were decent. Sharp pronounced wit was nice, outwit was predictable but i liked how you covered up the aha moment, setup was a lil eh tho. state of the art was kinda like wittys opener to me sounded better aloud. You trail off at the end of the verse, even the structure and flow was a bit diff. so im not sure what happened concepts were but the werent as fleshed out as your other lines.

v/ Sharp

03-07-2013, 09:01 PM	#1
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320636	I've already won, so when I buck - blast - see him run fast Sharp Nine? Guns are for shooting, not stabbing....dumbass This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped vs chicks hate you, they go for this clever chap instead ya girl fell for my 'pronounced wit'... so she never did that in bed text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone Witty, ur opener was cool. when its said aloud it sounds better, than it actually reads. made me lol tho stan shadys been down but i like how you flipped it with a nameplay.. closer coulda been nicer if it had been executed better. not a bad verse, rest of the lines were decent. Sharp pronounced wit was nice, outwit was predictable but i liked how you covered up the aha moment, setup was a lil eh tho. state of the art was kinda like wittys opener to me sounded better aloud. You trail off at the end of the verse, even the structure and flow was a bit diff. so im not sure what happened concepts were but the werent as fleshed out as your other lines. v/ Sharp