01-13-2014, 11:27 PM | #1 |
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FINAL: Allen Knight vs. oats - OATS WINS 6-3
10 lines / Due at 11:43 p.m. ET.
Voting: 5-0, first to seven or an hour after due date. (The battle will be moved to Discussion.) @oats @Allen Knight
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01-13-2014, 11:40 PM | #2 |
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good luck, gotta go get groceries
I blast AK like I’m!…I wouldn’t come that lame on my worst day NC is tired of played AK lines…since that’s how you got here in the first place oats is fresh, hear all about it, I knock you out with easy flips yeah we all know the talent is Certain…in other news you're an overrated piece of shit you’re supposed to be a battler? watch this OM cat pull your card, you suck all your verses so soft, you make my topicals look hard as fuck I played college ball, flying first class with personal maids and screens while you were sitting on coach…that’s the only way you made the team I’m perfect, flawless, impeccable, the truest of course! and if I ever made a mistake, I’d just have your chick tell you it was yours
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01-13-2014, 11:43 PM | #3 |
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Ur bitch lives on her knees, sucking dick & getting pound. out
A lifted truck wita confederate flag couldn't compare to how much we seen ur girl down south Ur smut let's me domlish her, my dick spark her brain I punished the hole for 48mins she left wit more tear drops than a tony parker game Im destroying ur gene pool, get murdered an dropped hoe Leave ur fam dead in a hall & oats back snaped like breaking a guitar at a rock show All u rb cats do's suck & fuck Gow on the low, then u deny it n hurl lies Shit U put more shots in war than a whole year of blackops kills world wide I get head 24/7..365, u don't get bitches u just hating sir Last time a bitch blew ur mind she shot u wit a shotgun to stop u from raping her
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01-13-2014, 11:49 PM | #4 |
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had oats. more directed for sure. ak's np was decent but forced, RB bar was better, the rest were mad generic
v/oats
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01-13-2014, 11:50 PM | #5 |
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disappointed in allens verse but he obv rushed it
even battle, oats closer takes it tbh i expected this to be an easy w after reading oatey's verse but it was all generic shit and oats had the better finish v/ oats
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01-13-2014, 11:51 PM | #6 |
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I blast AK like I’m!…I wouldn’t come that lame on my worst day
NC is tired of played AK lines…since that’s how you got here in the first place weak oats is fresh, hear all about it, I knock you out with easy flips yeah we all know the talent is Certain…in other news you're an overrated piece of shit nah you’re supposed to be a battler? watch this OM cat pull your card, you suck all your verses so soft, you make my topicals look hard as fuck nope I played college ball, flying first class with personal maids and screens while you were sitting on coach…that’s the only way you made the team played concept coach/sitting/kneeling/bus etc I’m perfect, flawless, impeccable, the truest of course! and if I ever made a mistake, I’d just have your chick tell you it was yours played again well ur truly a topical head. battle wise almost no solid punches or creativity. bunch of played shit but props on trying since u dont do this vs Ur bitch lives on her knees, sucking dick & getting pound. out A lifted truck wita confederate flag couldn't compare to how much we seen ur girl down south played as fuck Ur smut let's me domlish her, my dick spark her brain I punished the hole for 48mins she left wit more tear drops than a tony parker game lmao Im destroying ur gene pool, get murdered an dropped hoe Leave ur fam dead in a hall & oats back snaped like breaking a guitar at a rock show dope bar & that band too All u rb cats do's suck & fuck Gow on the low, then u deny it n hurl lies Shit U put more shots in war than a whole year of blackops kills world wide meh I get head 24/7..365, u don't get bitches u just hating sir Last time a bitch blew ur mind she shot u wit a shotgun to stop u from raping her weak closer yeah AK got this. better concepts and harder hitting punches. halls & oats was dope ok battle seen better vote - allen knight |
01-13-2014, 11:51 PM | #7 |
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01-13-2014, 11:52 PM | #8 |
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oats: Your opener was very good and had me thinking you might pull the upset. But then the rest of your verse was much weaker. The sitting on coach play was OK at best. The straightforward disses weren't personal. The closer was OK but generic.
Allen Knight: The Tony Parker line slayed me, especially since the Spurs' system is nicknamed "48 Minutes of Hell." The Hall & Oats line was OK at best, but it was a good concept that needed further exploration. The opener and closer were your weakest lines, which I can't remember ever seeing in a verse, but that's what happens in a keystyle. You left the door open for oats, but the Tony Parker line really connected for me. Vote: Allen Knight
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01-13-2014, 11:59 PM | #9 |
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Can we get votes?
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01-14-2014, 12:04 AM | #10 |
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Ahhhh damn leme vote
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01-14-2014, 12:09 AM | #11 |
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Both were slightly played but Oats was more polished. I thought AK's 48 mind line was clever buuuuut Pars stayed consistently avg whereas AK disappointed a bit esp 1st n last bar.
Vote: Oats
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01-14-2014, 12:11 AM | #12 |
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Both had generics, but I feel oats came with a fresher less generic of the two verses. AK seemed a bit rush. Both good for what it is.
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01-14-2014, 12:12 AM | #13 |
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oats leads 5-2. If this doesn't end itself by 12:45, I'm closing it.
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01-14-2014, 12:39 AM | #14 |
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I blast AK like I’m!…I wouldn’t come that lame on my worst day
NC is tired of played AK lines…since that’s how you got here in the first place Nice oats is fresh, hear all about it, I knock you out with easy flips yeah we all know the talent is Certain…in other news you're an overrated piece of shit Cool you’re supposed to be a battler? watch this OM cat pull your card, you suck all your verses so soft, you make my topicals look hard as fuck Not feeling I played college ball, flying first class with personal maids and screens while you were sitting on coach…that’s the only way you made the team Haha nice I’m perfect, flawless, impeccable, the truest of course! and if I ever made a mistake, I’d just have your chick tell you it was yours Eh Ur bitch lives on her knees, sucking dick & getting pound. out A lifted truck wita confederate flag couldn't compare to how much we seen ur girl down south Ok Ur smut let's me domlish her, my dick spark her brain I punished the hole for 48mins she left wit more tear drops than a tony parker game OK Im destroying ur gene pool, get murdered an dropped hoe Leave ur fam dead in a hall & oats back snaped like breaking a guitar at a rock show Nice All u rb cats do's suck & fuck Gow on the low, then u deny it n hurl lies Shit U put more shots in war than a whole year of blackops kills world wide Solid I get head 24/7..365, u don't get bitches u just hating sir Last time a bitch blew ur mind she shot u wit a shotgun to stop u from raping her Eh I got oats 3-2 on quotes but props to Allen clearly keying from his phone actually did a whole verse that was good V/oats |
01-14-2014, 12:42 AM | #15 |
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Vote allen
Mexican and better verse
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