Phuck Vs Lotto - PHUCK WINS

[Dope girl]

This was close battle
I give it to Lotto
Reason: I thought he a better verse with smoother lines & harder hitters.

[KwaL!ty]

Are we really counting that kind of vote?

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood

Lacks sting. I mean not really much to word but still IMO came off statement'ish.

You a lame fool,watch some baseball, quit dickriding n get real
Been taking trips to the home of metts, never setting a foot on citi field

Not sure where you were going with this, but I don't see this as being a diss of any type? Am I missing something? Just seemed statement'ish to me.

I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers

Concept there, kind of liked this but the flow through me off. Is it "Hate'em" you tried to rhyme with "Papers"? Doesn't rhyme in my language (English).

So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail

I see the concept, I think you just failed to execute properly.

In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop

Nothing here.

vs

gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit

Came off statement'ish IMO. Concept was decent but at the same time predictable. I'm sure this has been used against him his entire career while using this "Username".

fag likes men, dude gets a chubby when he grab a pen
so if you smile in my face il Crack Smirk, so he can never do that again

Not really feeling this, basic and lacks sting.

Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show

Concept there but lack the proper execution. Still not THAT bad tho.

stop claiming you get bitches & that you nail hoes
blow ur brains out, to ruin L-Train quicker then drunk driving on railroads

I see the metaphor just debating on how it's relevant? Maybe I am missing something here, please excuse me if I did.

you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women

Terrible simile. I see the Lots/Parking but think it's poorly worded and you could have taken that in a different direction to land a nice effective punch.

IMO: I see Phuck taking this battle because of his consistency. I mean there was nothing "Jaw Dropping" but he had a few concepts that he failed to execute on. Some Name flips/creativity throughout his verse as were Lotto was just to basic for me and a lot of his material came off statement'ish. I can see both probably did not put forth an effort compared to what I have read previously from both, but as I stated, IMO Phuck wins.

MVGT: Phuck

[Sharp]

6-5

[Ryan 12]

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood
So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail
^dope
In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop


vs


gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit
you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women


cool battle. i think lotto won cuz of consistency and had the lotb with the cort wp also he had that personal at the end. phuck i seen better from u but u lost this one by 1 quote



vote - lotto

[Pyro]

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood
didn't work here fam..

You a lame fool,watch some baseball, quit dickriding n get real
Been taking trips to the home of metts, never setting a foot on citi field
nah.. punch needs work

I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers
broken rhyme.. messed it up

So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail
stop breaking your rhymes mam. Work on adding more syllables in them

In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop
na man.. no real punch here


VS


gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit
ha. this was pretty clever. not hard but clever

fag likes men, dude gets a chubby when he grab a pen
so if you smile in my face il Crack Smirk, so he can never do that again
Na.. didn't work fam

Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show
pretty weak.

stop claiming you get bitches & that you nail hoes
blow ur brains out, to ruin L-Train quicker then drunk driving on railroads
somewhat... was light

you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women
could've been worded a lot better here.

I'm gonna go with who i thought was stronger with the punches.. Slightly consistent and more out of the box lines..

MVGT:Phuck

[Hush]

Lotto got this

[Sharp]

7-7 daaaamn up

[Orc]

axe at yew was an ok concept. gave up phuck too. it's a played name to have so i guess the lines u use will seem played no matter what. cort battle was ok too.


VS


crack smirk was cool but it's been done. didn't feel anything else. kinda wrote like a rican verse. bad wording.


i got Lotto

[fresh]

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood
Not feeling it, weak concept
You a lame fool,watch some baseball, quit dickriding n get real
Been taking trips to the home of metts, never setting a foot on citi field
nahh
I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers
this is better
So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail
Ehh not bad wording is hurting you here though
In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop
weak punch


gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit
concept is decent, could have been more impact though
fag likes men, dude gets a chubby when he grab a pen
so if you smile in my face il Crack Smirk, so he can never do that again
nice
Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show
funny, not bad
stop claiming you get bitches & that you nail hoes
blow ur brains out, to ruin L-Train quicker then drunk driving on railroads
weak
you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women
Not bad could have been worded better for more impact

I got this going to phuck for having better punches with more sting, and more comedic concepts that actually hit.

v/phuck

[DTK]

Lotto Smirk - i didn't think you brought creative enough ideas to go the nameplay route. Also, how can you write a full verse without mentioning your opponents name? It takes away from the personal feel, I did see the mod jab but you didn't really turn it into a hard hitting punch. Overall I think you could of brought some better thought out material but you show potential

Kwality - at least attempted wordplay in almost every bar. At least you incorporated his name into your plays to give it somewhat of a personal feel, I didn't think your material was outstanding but you did consistently jab at smirk..

So for that vote Kwal

[Sharp]

9-8 kwality

Originally Posted by DTK

Lotto Smirk - i didn't think you brought creative enough ideas to go the nameplay route. Also, how can you write a full verse without mentioning your opponents name? It takes away from the personal feel, I did see the mod jab but you didn't really turn it into a hard hitting punch. Overall I think you could of brought some better thought out material but you show potential

Kwality - at least attempted wordplay in almost every bar. At least you incorporated his name into your plays to give it somewhat of a personal feel, I didn't think your material was outstanding but you did consistently jab at smirk..

So for that vote Kwal

btw when this battle went down kwality was known as phuck yew, if you want to revise the vote a bit. (not saying any one guy should win but I know for a fact lotto did mention his opponents name)

[DTK]

No problem, certainly makes more sense. I'll get back at this if I got time, thanks for the heads up

[Answer]

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood

i wasnt really a fan of this one

You a lame fool,watch some baseball, quit dickriding n get real
Been taking trips to the home of metts, never setting a foot on citi field

good concept, but i wouldve liked to see it worded more directly

I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers

Dope concept, but the wordplay seems a little bit forced to me since you would typically say "gave him up" or "Gave up" not "gave a fuck".

So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail

This was dope

In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop

not my favorite bar in the verse




gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit

I've seen like a million Lotto and Digit lines against this dude, so its hard for me to give you credit for this

fag likes men, dude gets a chubby when he grab a pen
so if you smile in my face il Crack Smirk, so he can never do that again

I liked this

Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show

Nah, I've seen duck/duck concepts played to hell and this wasnt a really creative take on it

stop claiming you get bitches & that you nail hoes
blow ur brains out, to ruin L-Train quicker then drunk driving on railroads

Okayish

you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women

This is alright




This battle's pretty close tbh. I feel like Phuck definitely should've tried harder, because I could see this going either way. As far as punch lines concerned, I think they're just about neck and neck....the gave a fuck line would've been more than enough to seal the deal for me if it made more sense from both angles.

The tie breaker for me is just the fact that Phuck's flow was smoother for me, partially because he had the advantage of using multis and a couple of Lotto's lines didn't even rhyme for me.

MVGT - Phuck

[Diode]

I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers

vs

gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit
you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women

tbh i only listed the one gamble line because it was the least terrible thing he dropped. all of your verse was worded awkwardly or with 2001 concepts. getting wood? srs?

phuck wasn't all that great but still better. closer i quoted was a stretch but at least it was something i hadn't heard before

v/ phuck

[Paradigm]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood
pause? lol wtf
You a lame fool,watch some baseball, quit dickriding n get real
Been taking trips to the home of metts, never setting a foot on citi field
weak
I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers
no weak and doesnt rhyme?
So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail
no wtf lol
In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop
no weak

Originally Posted by KwaL!ty

15 min. key you ain't worth it ..


gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit
poorly worded
fag likes men, dude gets a chubby when he grab a pen
so if you smile in my face il Crack Smirk, so he can never do that again
poorly worded, weak
Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show
simple but ok
stop claiming you get bitches & that you nail hoes
blow ur brains out, to ruin L-Train quicker then drunk driving on railroads
lol no
you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women
lol the connection is funny

Lottos verse wasnt good and had no real sting or connections. kwals verse had connections but were worded very poorly. Kwality came with that HHE like style adjective wording... stop that immediately.

Vote - Kwality

RTF: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=57076

[KwaL!ty]

12-8 lol

[KwaL!ty]

@Sharp Nine