Regular Battle Title Match: ill nik-A vs Phuck Yew - NIK WINS

Certain · 01-11-2014, 03:56 AM

ill nik-A: There's a good chance this is the worst battle verse I have seen from you. When you opened with that blunt diss, I thought you were setting up a series of punches about how he shouldn't be here. The New Year's resolution line had failed promise but wasn't delivered correctly. The blow jobs line was terrible. Flattery was another good concept squandered on poor execution. Your saving grace is that you know the fundamentals. But nohing about this verse suggested you are a battler of repute.

Phuck Yew: Your wording needs real work. But your concepts do, too. The last line was basically a compliment. The ant line was a mess in every regard. Canes aren't walkers. Ice Age was not made by Disney. The old fashion line was your best execution, but the concept was played. This verse was not good, like this battle[

Vote: ill-Nika.

01-11-2014, 03:56 AM	#12
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	ill nik-A: There's a good chance this is the worst battle verse I have seen from you. When you opened with that blunt diss, I thought you were setting up a series of punches about how he shouldn't be here. The New Year's resolution line had failed promise but wasn't delivered correctly. The blow jobs line was terrible. Flattery was another good concept squandered on poor execution. Your saving grace is that you know the fundamentals. But nohing about this verse suggested you are a battler of repute. Phuck Yew: Your wording needs real work. But your concepts do, too. The last line was basically a compliment. The ant line was a mess in every regard. Canes aren't walkers. Ice Age was not made by Disney. The old fashion line was your best execution, but the concept was played. This verse was not good, like this battle[ Vote: ill-Nika.