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I like the way you describe the man with the cane
passing by day after day it was an interesting approach. "I saw him once before, As he passed by the door, And again The pavement stones resound, As he totters o’er the ground With his cane." The next part seemed to describe the change in times from the old mans perspective and how it affects and inflicts him. Again a very unique approach! "Life’s an intricate system of “tension” and “change” spanning far beyond subatomic physical plane observe the pacing, disaccharidase, digital age idle intolerance; an argument for Heidegger’s claim “Inanimate object”! Heh...ironic twist of conjugal fate At least in this context; marriage, mix...lethargic exchange" From here it seemed to go into a dream of what could have been for the man career wise but ended up waking up in a dead end job. Great read!
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