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Originally Posted by ill nik-A
u said I’m one of the best cuz I got elite flowing in every week’s showing
But flattery will get u nowhere.... unless u're under the tire & I keep going
got bitches that call me to smoke & bang while u struggle as u should to get laid
we both tend to wake & bake... difference is u deliver a cake to the hooker u paid
u don’t want me to give u a Cuban necktie cuz I’ve got it mastered great
u’ve also cut necks before… & do everything possible to avoid aftershave
Just last week u said ya verses vs me & Kar were gonna prove u a beast
guess ur New Years resolution was see how many champ matches u could lose in a week
verses lack flow, originality, concepts, wording... they're a constant problem
u don't only show a series of mistakes... u provide the unlimited edition box set of them
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ill nik-A
Phuck, I've got to be honest and say it really seems like you rushed your verse. Did you really rhyme twat and squat?! ha, but really there were a few potentials in there but nothing that stood out to me. I liked the concept of the Walt Disney line and feel it could have been executed so much better (and maybe a bit more factual - Disney didn't make Ice Age 2). Overall I found this a bit one sided in my opinion and for the quoted lines I gave my vote to Nik.
Good luck both..
01-10-2014, 12:42 PM
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