i do this shit to express what's real

Exis · 01-10-2014, 09:11 AM

Ima 'bout to hit the hay but thought I'd get at this before I do, was gonna get at Vulgar & Zygote's shit but that's long as and will have to wait 'til the mornin'...sorry niggas lol.

Anyways this was fuckin' nice man...like the title suggests 'realness' is what I've come to expect from your work and more importantly what I mainly love about it.Your content is really well worded here and flow wise shits smooth as silk partna...for example -

Fuck a life. Fuck the hurt. Fuck concern. Fuck a wife.
Lately i feel like for me it's more deserving to die.
Cuz at times I get this murderous vibe with every person in sight
And it's reaccurence reassures me that i'm probably right.

^^ That's melt in your mouth type stuff (no homoses) I normally don't like when the same word is used so often durin' a line or back to back bars, think I even mentioned that in feed I left earlier today on Strick's piece but yeah...you pulled it off imo.

I expect these next steps are bizzare, i heard its especially hard
To forgive yourself and live...
Cuz sometimes things are better left the way that they are.

^^Good closer...I like how you bought the scheme back from 'especially hard' instead of continuin' with the 'yourself and live' one...if that makes sense you scheme not knowin' douche lol.

Great read JW, it's joints like this that make me wanna write more often than I do...inspirin' shit to say the least.

Stay upwards fam.

01-10-2014, 09:11 AM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Ima 'bout to hit the hay but thought I'd get at this before I do, was gonna get at Vulgar & Zygote's shit but that's long as and will have to wait 'til the mornin'...sorry niggas lol. Anyways this was fuckin' nice man...like the title suggests 'realness' is what I've come to expect from your work and more importantly what I mainly love about it.Your content is really well worded here and flow wise shits smooth as silk partna...for example - Fuck a life. Fuck the hurt. Fuck concern. Fuck a wife. Lately i feel like for me it's more deserving to die. Cuz at times I get this murderous vibe with every person in sight And it's reaccurence reassures me that i'm probably right. ^^ That's melt in your mouth type stuff (no homoses) I normally don't like when the same word is used so often durin' a line or back to back bars, think I even mentioned that in feed I left earlier today on Strick's piece but yeah...you pulled it off imo. I expect these next steps are bizzare, i heard its especially hard To forgive yourself and live... Cuz sometimes things are better left the way that they are. ^^Good closer...I like how you bought the scheme back from 'especially hard' instead of continuin' with the 'yourself and live' one...if that makes sense you scheme not knowin' douche lol. Great read JW, it's joints like this that make me wanna write more often than I do...inspirin' shit to say the least. Stay upwards fam.