discourse and conjunction

[dead man]

Originally Posted by Natural

Yeah. You have a wide vocabulary or like to appear to have one. Perhaps you love rhyming dictionarys...perhaps you hate them(or want to appear to hate them).
You have a fan base on netcees....which is probably because you can actually write well..
But I think you use that to your advantage and are able to put together these sporadic pieces and still get props for it(when most ppl wouldn't).
Somehow your stature on netcees gets you a free to do whatever you want pass...
And I'm not a huge fan of it because there is plenty of writers that I've seem write at your level and beyond and not gotten the same credit.

I'm not sure I've ever seen anyone point out a negative in your writing.
Either your perfect or they suck fat Dick.
But why? Oh well guess its an unsolved mystery.

You can write and your rhyme ability is pretty grand....
But I think you half ass a lot of your writing and do it knowing your work will be praised anyway.
I think your talent would be better used in a fully coherent piece.
Though I'm sure you or your fan base will argue your writing is perfectly coherent

Oh well.
Its not about them. Its about my opinion.
At the end of the day you can shrug my opinion off and proceed to write this shit...if you want

Or you can actually try
And write a coherent polished piece of art and give real reason for as much praise as you get
Peace

if by "half ass" you mean have fun writing as opposed to laboring over some fucking magnum opus thesis in every verse then yea i half ass everything nowadays. sorry pal

sincere thanks for your comments and for reading.. @everybody