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01-09-2014, 08:05 PM
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Atomic a writ is a really, really forced rhyme.
Nothing in this drop is unique or interesting and the rhyming isn't good enough to distract the reader from that. All of the ideas are generic. The metaphors and allusions are basic.
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01-09-2014, 08:10 PM
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Its not forced. Thanks for your opinion. Bye now. |
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