THE OPEN MIC CYPHER

Just Write · 01-09-2014, 02:30 PM

So here i am again. Blank pad and a pen, deciding whether to write about something sad, or try blending the mix. Or would it be better to clevery create a plot in the middle? I could make the main character get shot and hobble a little, maybe make him walk with a cane that has a knot in the middle. It's important to be decriptive, imagery's key! But sometimes im too picky, too finicky when i key. Woe is me, i guess i just think about it hopelessly til it takes over me... sorry, i get a little over emotional when trying to envoke you to read.. something beautiful. Ive been told It's crucial to say something useful when you write, not the usual hype. That Make it "hit the audience" type til they feel a rush like peruvian white. so for who do you write, Yourself? Or to appease the crowd? The same faggots in the disc. Board trying to keep you down? I used to write to let my demons out, but that's all i see when im sleeping now. So i write to stay awake. It's gives me a sense of accomplishment, like ive finalized mistakes. it's a more peaceful route, keepin me calm n shit. you ever feel that way? Fuck it, 29 now.. let the dirty years begin. Ima write a bucket list worse than these last 30 years of sin... like Fuckin a model bitch named rhonda while tokin on a spliff, sippin a fifth of vodka in a broke down honda off route 66. Might pop in a disc of mickey avalons greatest hits and play that song jane fonda, then drive off of a cliff.. long live the abyss.

Concrete · 01-10-2014, 04:48 PM

whatever I say
You are forever gay

01-09-2014, 02:30 PM	#1
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	So here i am again. Blank pad and a pen, deciding whether to write about something sad, or try blending the mix. Or would it be better to clevery create a plot in the middle? I could make the main character get shot and hobble a little, maybe make him walk with a cane that has a knot in the middle. It's important to be decriptive, imagery's key! But sometimes im too picky, too finicky when i key. Woe is me, i guess i just think about it hopelessly til it takes over me... sorry, i get a little over emotional when trying to envoke you to read.. something beautiful. Ive been told It's crucial to say something useful when you write, not the usual hype. That Make it "hit the audience" type til they feel a rush like peruvian white. so for who do you write, Yourself? Or to appease the crowd? The same faggots in the disc. Board trying to keep you down? I used to write to let my demons out, but that's all i see when im sleeping now. So i write to stay awake. It's gives me a sense of accomplishment, like ive finalized mistakes. it's a more peaceful route, keepin me calm n shit. you ever feel that way? Fuck it, 29 now.. let the dirty years begin. Ima write a bucket list worse than these last 30 years of sin... like Fuckin a model bitch named rhonda while tokin on a spliff, sippin a fifth of vodka in a broke down honda off route 66. Might pop in a disc of mickey avalons greatest hits and play that song jane fonda, then drive off of a cliff.. long live the abyss. __________________

01-10-2014, 04:48 PM	#2
Concrete Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2013 Location: Oslo Posts: 179 Battle Record: 5-0 Rep Power: 2158978	whatever I say You are forever gay Last edited by Concrete; 02-11-2014 at 11:43 AM.