(Codeman, Endsane, & Badi Alii) cypher flex

jdeek · 01-04-2014, 10:29 AM

You should honor our presence cuz we veterans
Together we write for nothin but our individual betterment

The weaker get hit, leak liters of blood, fill the beakers and shit
I'm the grim reaper with speakers you pricks just eat what i dish
I'm at the peak of this at least for the rest of the week you bitch...< lol. nice

Rap is my lyrical medicine using similes and mettas with
My cleverness cause ever since I was born it was embedded in
A hip hop resident not hesitant to represent my pen and writs

^^i like how that's like one long continuing statement. i do that a lot and don't see it much. i think hip hop resident could be reworded to keep the flow as fluid as the rest..but it's still nice as it is.

Plead the fifth you give me every reason to leave you ripped
Scream and wish that I don't unleash this legion of demon fists

Makin paraplegics flip, dissolvin the puke on a bulimic’s chin
Darken up every anemic’s tint while followers of Jesus strip
This writing could almost make a policeman hip…Almost
Open up your spleen and shit until our feces stick
So at least you can be someone even as a piece of shit
Agreed, I’m sick. Forever diseased with fits of this seasoned spit
Breathin in the spliff and releasin wisps of hits as it’s seepin in
Sneakin fire back from these elitist tricks, label me Prometheus

solid verse to end it with..

good collab y'all. not much bad to say...sections included were my fave's from each person. cool how ya kepth the same rhymes almost all the way through..isn't too easy. for it to be a 3 person collab it held together pretty well. good shit.

01-04-2014, 10:29 AM	#4
jdeek Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 21 Rep Power: 0	You should honor our presence cuz we veterans Together we write for nothin but our individual betterment The weaker get hit, leak liters of blood, fill the beakers and shit I'm the grim reaper with speakers you pricks just eat what i dish I'm at the peak of this at least for the rest of the week you bitch...< lol. nice Rap is my lyrical medicine using similes and mettas with My cleverness cause ever since I was born it was embedded in A hip hop resident not hesitant to represent my pen and writs ^^i like how that's like one long continuing statement. i do that a lot and don't see it much. i think hip hop resident could be reworded to keep the flow as fluid as the rest..but it's still nice as it is. Plead the fifth you give me every reason to leave you ripped Scream and wish that I don't unleash this legion of demon fists Makin paraplegics flip, dissolvin the puke on a bulimic’s chin Darken up every anemic’s tint while followers of Jesus strip This writing could almost make a policeman hip…Almost Open up your spleen and shit until our feces stick So at least you can be someone even as a piece of shit Agreed, I’m sick. Forever diseased with fits of this seasoned spit Breathin in the spliff and releasin wisps of hits as it’s seepin in Sneakin fire back from these elitist tricks, label me Prometheus solid verse to end it with.. good collab y'all. not much bad to say...sections included were my fave's from each person. cool how ya kepth the same rhymes almost all the way through..isn't too easy. for it to be a 3 person collab it held together pretty well. good shit.