New Emcees(warning)

[PancakeBrah]

If you want, I could go in depth as to why this isn't good. In my opinion. It might be good to someone, but I don't really see how. But I probably won't. I'll just say it's not good and you can dismiss it as me hating on you for some reason.

Also; don't you think you might could release these shorter verses as a packaged open mic, a sort of compilation, and get more attention/feed? Readers skim the front page and see 5-6 open mics by one person and just look at another writers solo work. At least I do. You obviously enjoy writing, but this is a cypher post. A few other pieces you've posted are as well. Either flesh it out (give us a full 16 at least) or cypher it. Not saying you have to do this, just a suggestion. Food for thought, could be wrong.

[Natural]

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

If you want, I could go in depth as to why this isn't good. In my opinion. It might be good to someone, but I don't really see how. But I probably won't. I'll just say it's not good and you can dismiss it as me hating on you for some reason.

Also; don't you think you might could release these shorter verses as a packaged open mic, a sort of compilation, and get more attention/feed? Readers skim the front page and see 5-6 open mics by one person and just look at another writers solo work. At least I do. You obviously enjoy writing, but this is a cypher post. A few other pieces you've posted are as well. Either flesh it out (give us a full 16 at least) or cypher it. Not saying you have to do this, just a suggestion. Food for thought, could be wrong.

@PancakeBrah
You seem somewhat genuine about what you are saying for once so, I will reply in a normal manner.
I would like to hear an honest opinion why you think this is "not good" If that requires you going in depth so be it.
I am not so ignorant to believe this is top notch witt, because witt is something I'm just now starting to really develope.
I'm inconsistent with witt....but when I nail it I nail it.

I've focused a lot on scheming....flow....at times multi's
But neglected witt
I also don't believe this is bottom teir garbage....but to each his own on that.

99% of the time you ARE hating on me....for whatever ya reason is...idc really.
It's unproductive and old. There's nothing I can really do about it but ignore it
or retort back. Neither seem to do much to resolve it.

I will ALWAYS write....I love it. I'm pretty much obcessed with it.
Nobody will take that away from me....if the Internet no longer existed
There is always paper.

I agree with you on my drops being short and they could go in the cypher.
I will heed that piece of advice and write 16 lines or more in the future.

My "mistreated" piece is 24 lines though.