AOWL WK 3: dead man (2-0) VS. pohfig (2-0) [POHFIG WINS, 5-4.]

Frank · 03-04-2013, 10:55 PM

Vote - Pent Up

Pains me to say it. I thought the flow of his story was more entertaining on this night then the philosophic scheming of Blacks. The ending was a little weak but pent ups story was light hearted and danced quite candidly. Black was usual madness and I feel his verse was a metaphore for why he doesn't vote lol. Silly as that sounds. I haven't voted cause this is was a tough decision. Great contrast of styles displayed. Enjoyed both. Just one a little bit more.

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03-04-2013, 10:55 PM	#13
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Vote - Pent Up Pains me to say it. I thought the flow of his story was more entertaining on this night then the philosophic scheming of Blacks. The ending was a little weak but pent ups story was light hearted and danced quite candidly. Black was usual madness and I feel his verse was a metaphore for why he doesn't vote lol. Silly as that sounds. I haven't voted cause this is was a tough decision. Great contrast of styles displayed. Enjoyed both. Just one a little bit more. 1 __________________ *VETWORK*